I really liked and enjoyed this story. Awesome job!

This is how I always viewed the Organization: A dysfunctional family, hell-bent on getting hearts and manipulating each other, but a family none-the-less. Great job.

Oh meh gawd O.O

I dont know why i waited until this last chapter to reveiw, but i have to say. This is quite possibly one of the best fanfictions i have ever read. You incorprate incredible ideas, mainly original, give us taste of extreme inner conflict, feed us angst like its a turky feast, lit fires of emotion into my heart, and gave us an amazing plot, that when we thought couldnt get worse, definately. got. worse. I give you my major respect, as your story is quite frankly the first ive ever read to actually make me shed a few tears, at how much emotion it poured into me just from reading it the first time through. Sora's death was soooo sad. Ive never seen a writer who could express so much EMOTION into a story. Who are an amazing writer, and i give you my respect.

-Sincerely RainzOfRage

YOU FUCKING KILLED NAMINE OFF I AM GONNA KILL YOU SHE IS MY FAV CHARACTER AND YOU KILLED HER DO NOT WORRY CUZ I SHALL HELP ROXAS KILL SORA NO MATTER HOW MUCH I LIKE HIM I WILL GET REVENGE!HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAAHHA!

lenne was already a summoner she just also was a singer stupid get your facts straight (no ofense just get kinda pissed : its my second favorite game anyway KH being the first) love it

Right. So.

I've left three review in a row now, but time for the full on judgment.

In terms of execution: brilliant. Characters are spot on, reactions are logical, you've done a wonderful job weaving a story. I particularly liked the part where Sora goes completely psycho. Was fun to read. Would have liked to see him in a badass longcoat and body armor as a Heartless General or something.

Less brilliant things:

1. Kairi was a bit weepy. And by that I mean that she seemed to break into tears once every chapter, which felt mildly excessive.

2. Sora and Roxas. I mentioned earlier that I think you should've either killed one or the other and then left them dead. Also, Sora's antagonism seems... farfetched? What I mean is, it's entirely understandable for him to be very very angry, but what we see here is something greatly resembling a permanent shattering of the relationship between Sora and King Mickey, which seems kind of excessive. I also much preferred the idea of OrgXIII(I) being redeemed, but that's not really much of an issue, I suppose.

3. King Mickey's offering of his crown also seems slightly out of character, but I'm not sure how you'd resolve that, so eh.

So, long paragraph of criticism is long, but it's really only a small part of the story (chapters 33 and 34, mostly), and the rest of it was amazing. There's not much to say about the good stuff except that it was good. Sora's decent was particularly well done. otherwise, I'm done with the soapbox. Good work!

Blaaaaaaaaaaaaah disregard my previous review. I have to say though, this is feeling a little deus-ex-machina. I would argue that you shoulda killed Roxas and left him dead, or killed Sora and left HIM dead.

If I was a flamer, I'd flip shit about you making Roxas sacrifice himself for you ship, but I'm not a flamer. That being said, I do NOT agree with Roxas sacrificing himself. Plotwise, I think it would have been more sensical (that's not a word I know) for Roxas to stay "alive". Kairi gets progressively more accepting of Roxas, so I think it would have been better for the story and for the characters for Kairi to have blocked (somehow) Roxas' blow. Desperation, perhaps? Regardless, just my thoughts.

Sooooooo awesomee! I'm a RokuNami fan to death and when I saw this had SoKai and Larxel I just couln't help but read it! And I do NOT regret it B) lol but I remember I was about to leave when I saw there was NamiKu :$ but I started reading Nobody's Perfect and I read this once again totally loved it! And wow! 616 reviews? You're certainly a MASTER! I'm still laughing from the day Larxy and Nami got drunk :3 and I almost cried when Roxy and Nami fought :'( and when Nami died I DID cry HARD! D': too much to take! And her sacrifice was sooo sweet :'''''( lol but sappy ending lol THE BAD GUYS! B) do you agree with me on Namine should be the Number XIV and NOT Xion? If you want, you could read this new fic I'll post soon, it's about Namine being Number XIV after CoM, like a Days with Nami :) LoVeD the part where they fade together :'3 LOVE YOUR FIC! And btw, I think I don't like Arlene now -_-

Holy crap evil preview. ;_; GAH, I was supposed to be studying for my oral today, but DAMN now I have to read the sequel.

There are some grammar errors in here, mostly stuff like "Kairi and Riku was" and you mix present and past tense a lot. There was also a bit of OOC (from Larxene and Xemnas, mostly) but the story was great! I just couldn't stop reading. I finished this in one day. 8D Yay for fluff?

GAAAAHHHHHH I don't know why, he doesn't even do that much, but EACH TIME DEMYX DOES SOMETHING IT'S LIKE SQUEEAAAAAAAL 3 He's just too adorable.

LOL fricking AWESOME story! Seriously awesome... Best KH fic I've ever come across! Actually made me cry in a few spots... Like when Kairi shattered poor Sora's Heart... Ever seen someone's heart get shattered by one they love? Their expressions and behaviors can be radically different... Such as you portrayed with Sora. In addition, it was not only well written, the plot did not drag on forever, your story keeps your readers on the edge of their seat, and there were no horribly awkward sentences that you find in so many stories. Your grammar wasn't horribly sloppy, but the way the characters spoke wasn't overly formal, either. Also, they were very few mistakes with your punctuation... I'm actually fairly sure that I seen less than ten in the entire story... However, it IS 2 AM where I am currently, but I usually pick up on those types of things even when on the verge of passing out. Your spelling was a lot better than most people's are, I seen few spelling errors but they are there. However, we all misspell things and they were so few words that I was really impressed... If you've read down this far, you're probably wondering why I left you this HUGE review... Well there are a few reasons... 1)Because your story deserves a HUGE review [it was seriously that good]; 2) Because I'm procrastinating on heading to bed [Lame, yes. oh well .]; 3) I haven't written a review in so long.

Yeah, I know my opinion doesn't really matter- hell, if I had a review this lengthy, I'd laugh and show it to my best friend- but knowing that someone really really enjoyed your story makes it all right, right? I'm hoping, at least. Well, I hope my chatter didn't put you to sleep or annoy you.

May your muse never run dry,

Midnight's Queen

I read this story 2 years back or so and to be completely honest, I never forgot about it. I just read read the first chapter again and plan to re-read the entire thing again (as soon as I have time :P). I just wanted to say that I completely fell in love with this story and it has been well-remembered.

RIKU CANT BE WITH NAMINE ITS SUPPOSED TO ROXAS! T_T WWHHHHHYYY

Do you know how long it took me to find this? I remember reading it ages ago, before I had an account, and now I found it again. I just really remembered that it was so canon that I nearly cried, and the sequel. And the letter/note. But it was the 'Sora calls Roxas his Other Side' that jogged my memory.

Thank you for writing an amazing work!

Aisha

Anima is the most powerful summon in FF X only if you don't go after Yojimbo, which is the most powerful. I know because I got every summon on mine, and Yojimbo can kill some boss enemies in one shot, as long as he uses his ultimate move, since he can use like four moves depending on how much you pay him to stay in batte. Anima is probably the most powerful stationary summon that you don't need to do anything tio keep in battle. Never got to her to X-2, because my disc stopped working and while trying to get the game 100% complete, I screwed up somewhere and had to do it all over, and then I have to keep doing things over and over and it gets annoying. Especially not skipping ANY cutscenes. Anyway, this story is awesome so far, and now I keep reading to the end and then start reading the sequel.