OMG i totally squealed at the last part XD

so cute

Awesome! You really captured the characters personalities! It made me laugh and you have great talent.

XD

Deleciously funny. I love the implied and abrupt ending, which leaves everything to a fangirl's imagination.

Xd - That's so Pain. Really.

Good job.

I love PainxCharon! Your story rocks!

hahaha i luved it.

*snickers* I'm not really sure 'poor Charon' is appropriate under the circumstances, especially not since I'm grinning rather widely at the moment. (Although I suppos I should feel a little sorry for all that overtime Pain's antics is going to cost Charon - even if there are, of course, compensations.) A delightfully fun ficlet.

Cute. I love Charon

AHH, why didn't I read this earlier? :0 I'm sorry.

It was fairly easy to understand the characters. Because you didn't put in any major background plot stuff. Yeehaw.

I love how everyone you write for is just gay and lovers and stuff. Like, it never even occurs to them. They just are. That's cool.

Poor Charon. I have a feeling that Pain is my favorite character from that manga. xDD