Reviews for Of Time and Blue Boxes

Reviews For: Of Time and Blue Boxes

IndeMaat 2007-01-16 ch 2,	abuseHmm. The Doctor and a girl jump from the back of a train which is about to crash and all the passengers get killed, and they don't even so much as scrape their knees? Even if I accept that the impact from jumping of a train is half of being flung forward in a crashing train, I still don't believe it. Bad physics kind of ruin the story for me. When is this story set that 911 wouldn't believe there was a terrorist on the train? Why didn't the Conductor question why the Railway Agency had sent a man to tell him about changed schedules rather than using the radio? If they had time to send a man on board they must have had time to use the radio? Or even, had time for that man to address the engineer before pulling out of the last station. I am curious though why the Doctor is dealing with a rift anomaly. He usually only interfers when an alien threat has piqued his curiosity. I'm puzzled by the fact the Doctor knows both the original and the changed history.
DarkAngelPearl 2006-06-04 ch 4,	abuseNO!! It can’t be over! Now I will wait for the One-Shots. I really liked this story and I agree completely of the short chapters. It just gives the readers wanting more. So, PLEASE update soon with the One-Shots. And I’m glad you put Jack in there also because… will, it’s like you said, it seemed to add something to the story. Will, great job on this fic! Anyone else says otherwise are total dorks! ~DAP
DarkAngelPearl 2006-06-01 ch 3,	abuseNow you KNOW you can’t keep it at this! And can Rose help it if she gets jealous seeing the Doctor with another woman? I mean, he’s cute! But at least she found out that it was just a spurred of the moment thing that Alix wanted to see how the TARDIS worked. And I know how finals are, so take your time to posting the next chapter. But you should be studying, young lady! LOL, I can’t believe it’s going to be over after this but I’ll be looking out for those one-shots! Will, update whenever you can! ~DAP
brmngirl 2006-06-01 ch 3,	abuseWow. Great chapter. I hope you update soon. 10/10. laterz
HoVis 2006-06-01 ch 3,	abuseHey... great chapter! I hope this isn't the end, though... A few comments: It seemed a bit... sudden, the way which Alix understood Rose straight away, but then again I guess that's just an effect the Doctor has on people... I loved the way the Doctor persuaded Alix to go back home - will we have one more chapter explaining why she was so important? Well done - more please! HoVis
laced-with-fire 2006-06-01 ch 3,	abusethisis good, keep it up
HoVis 2006-05-27 ch 2,	abuseAh, great second chapter. One tiny spelling quibble - it's "brakes" not "breaks", but I'm only pointing that out because it's such a good story in the first place... More! HoVis
brmngirl 2006-05-23 ch 2,	abuseI really like this story...I just got into the series and Not too much up to date with it...all i have seen are the new episodes...I would like to see where you take this story...Update soon...10/10...laterz
DarkAngelPearl 2006-05-22 ch 2,	abuseI love the doctor! Please update soon, I want to know what’ll happen next!! And If I were Alix I would have beat him for more information. But I know how it is when you can’t think about anything but the headache or migraine brewing within your head. Will, update!! ~DAP
DarkAngelPearl 2006-05-22 ch 1,	abuseI’m intrigued!! I love Doctor Who and this story got my curiosity. Please update soon!! ~DAP
HoVis 2006-05-21 ch 1,	abuseOoh, looking interesting. Can't wait to see where you go with this! Great start - update soon, please! HoVis

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