You seem to be forgetting that tonks was still going to hogwarts when harry first went there, you have increased her age far too much for her to still be andromoda tonks' child.

Wow. This is quite the story. I really like that you portray the children as children. I hope you come back to this story and finish it.

Great story. I think this is definately one of the better time-travel stories. Lots of authors have tried the "send his/her soul back in time" thing, but they usually aren't very good. Too many Mary Sues and it's just boring when there's no obstacles for the good guys to overcome.

You don't have any problem with that. While it started off very angstry, I was glad when it started to get a bit better for poor Hermione.

I really like the way the friendships have developed and how not everything is following the original timeline. It makes sense to me that if so many things are already different, it would impact other things as well.

I like it when Harry call the aurors "Horrors" - lol. The animagi idea is interesting, and I usually enjoy reading it a lot, but it seems like pushing it a bit far for the kids to achieve that as well. I'm glad Hermione got a sphynx. Ever since the one in GOF, I was very interested in them. We never see them again in canon, so I am curious about what you will have it do.

I also like how Hermione was able to encourage Harry to make other friends. While I don't mind him prefering her above the rest, the possessive and obsessive Harry is just creepy. he's cute, though, and it's sweet how he tries to always protect Hermione.

I'm also really glad that Hermione has been able to confide a bit more in Remus. Even if he still thinks she's a Seer, it's nice that she cries and accepts his comfort while telling him about Luna's mom. It's good that Hermione isn't so completely isolated, and I hope that their relationship continues to develop as well.

I just LOVED how Hermione continues caring for all the underdogs - that's so characteristically Hermione. I congratulate you on her position with the house-elves. I've noticed most authors take the easy way out by having Hermione "grow out of it." (I don't mind when she chooses to change her tactics or goals, but when she abandons it altogether, well that just screams author-laziness to me. Rather than dealing with the issue, they just make it nonexistant.)

I see that this was written pre-DH, so Snape's loyalty wasn't known yet. It seems like when you were writing that first scene where we saw him, that you left room for it to go either way. While I don't mind grouch!Snape (he IS a grouch), I really hope you don't have him as evil. I think he got a really rotten deal from JKR and hope you might have a little mercy for him.

Even though I see you haven't updated for a while, I'll keep it on alert anyway. It's a wonderful story.

Aww im going to miss Crookshanks. and it's really hard to imagine a Sphyinx without it looking like stone. i hope your going to change harry. and if you feel like it's taking to long you could always skip a few years and sumerazie the before hogwarts years more. i hope snape isnt going to be such a jerk. this time around. hope you update soon it has been over a year love your story. and how dumbledore isnt all manipulative that usually ruins the time travel stories for me. Update soon.
DA

I was rereading this... I love Luna! I hope she plays a bigger role in the story. What's going to happen next? Please UPDATE!

-Baby K

Sweetie: please tell me you haven't forgotten us? I saw by your bio that you planned at lest three stories. Can we get another chapter?

I've really enjoyed this fic. It strays so far from the norm (time travel norm, that is) and develops the relationships in such an interesting and engaging manner. The deviations from canon aren't that big a stretch of the imagination and tie in well to the established (read: canon) elements.

I did find some of the earlier bits a tad difficult to swallow (adult personality transplanted to a very young child, for instance) but once I got past that, the rest seemed to flow nicely.

You introduced a healthy amount of intrigue and tension that I hope to see culminate into something bigger and more explosive in the future.

Which leads into my entreaties for a continuation. It's been quite some time since you last updated - please tell me this story isn't abandoned? I would so love to see how things progress and change and the final outcome of Hermione's "mission", particularly since she has greatly impacted the future through her changing of the past/present.

Thank you for sharing this entertaining story!
~Shay.

Nice job so far...

hi;
please tell me you have not forgotten about this fict, i hope you do plan on updating soon?
mike

Fantastic story and can't wait for MORE. Update soon.

Ok I just stayed up all night so that I could read this entire story. It is awesome. I won't deny I like a bit more romance but I understand with them being children. Very good story and I would hope that you continue with it

Please update soon.

I love it!! are you continuing with this story? please say you are!

this fanfic FREAKS ME OUT...

my mind is haunted by this story so far, im afraid to continue.

Not that im saying that it is a bad story,

its great actually and very well thought of.

You know, this is a great story. But, why didn't Hermione just tell Harry when Voldemort would be coming back so they'd have plenty of time to train and stuff? That might have saved her some grief, 'cause Harry's a rather impatient person. Just curious. Great story.