That was really good and displayed the emotions perfectly.

It was also beautiful and, and, made me cry.

Now going to read your next story

Princess Ducky

great story!

it was good, the spelling and punctuation needs a little work, but that's ok.

;_;

That's so incredibly...sad... especially in the beginning, when James doesn't even get the chance to finish what he's about to say - it's just...I dunno. ;_;

You made me cry for the second time of the day! Wah, it's either you're a really great writer or I'm having a very emotional day. Great one-shot.

Oh gosh. This is the third time-the THIRD TIME-that your stories have made me cry. Seriously. I was bawling like a baby, almost more than I cried when I watched the notebook. Congrats. You really bring the tragedy to life.

my gosh, this is so sad.
this made me cry,
it's SO great

Oh God!!
Stop making me cry!!

The one that really made me cry is Sirius.
It kind of made feel as if I was the that was dying...
Sounds weird, no?

that's really really sad!!