Really well-written and the narration is really great. I'm not really accquainted with KenTomoe but this is really nice. :)

well-written ficlet, I really like it!;

Hey..

I love this!

The tone at the opening laid out the entire fics progress... Crisp and chilly.. The following para leads away beautifully.. and finally the ending..

Great work on the this..

Cya