i thought brock was boulder and erika was rainbow

COOL! I loved the Home Alone: Lost In New York quote! Quote: Merry Christmas, ya filth animal! And a Happy New Year, too!; End quote

Somewhat interesting. This is actually better than the cartoon was.

Misty is older than Ash.

Dialogue should be written as "Hello," he said or "Hello!" he said, never "Hello." He said.

The only time you use a period and capitalize the beginning of the next sentence is if it's written like as "Hello." He looked around. where there is no speech verb (said, grumbled, snapped) in the sentence.

your stories are always good ashk.

dude you kick ass!

wow cool is getting better be the way will you do chapter for of the chosen one because orange island is the more short of all the season and to add more chapter to this fic

Hey, your works kick ass!

I love you with all my heart and soul,

Dark Charmer

nice chapters your writing keep it up.

sweet start hope you update soon this story is really good

This is a cute and cool story. Please continue. Ash and Misty forever.