no problem, it's the name of a gackt song, so you get kudos for having a great title! i would really like to see more of this story! your writing in not bad, and i can see you spent some time on this, very good. only thing i'd complain about is the fight scene. in the shows, everything is rapid-fire quick, and it seems more like they're fighting through instinct and reflex, not thought-out stances. and i think zuko, though weaker than azula, would have fought harder and succumbed after a longer fight. nevertheless, good job! i would love to read the next chapter.

ellet

all I can say is wow that is the best Zuko joining aang ive read yet well done brillant one-shot it could become a chapter story but its good as a one-shot. Well done.