 Monotolang 2008-12-28 . chapter 1I just finished this for the second time. In one go this time, I was up until three. Not much can keep me up until three.
I love this fic. I love it so much.
Kudos on making all the science believable in the Kim Possible fandom. |
 Trinity666 2008-12-28 . chapter 18DAMN this story was SO good. I have to admit this has got to be one the best KiGo fics I've ever read. I've read a decent amount of KiGo fics but this is by far one the best i've read so far. I like the rollercoaster of emotions that the two woman encounter being stranded together in a somewhat present/post apocalyptic world. I am sci-fic fan so I really enjoyed reading all the dimensional transport jargon that Kim was researching. And the awkward way that Kim and Shego got together was very realistic. They didn't rush things and they both struggled with their sexuality, Kim moreso than Shego. It took almost a whole to finish this fic but IT was too good for me to stop. Good job with the plot.
TrInItY6 |
 DemonsWolf 2008-11-23 . chapter 18*snickers* Mint? Gawd, you had me on the floor laughing with that one. This is in the Top 5 fanfictions I've EVER read. And I've read alot of them. As in, obsessive amount of them. I can't believe how smoothly you make the words flow.. *worships* |
 Alcandre 2008-11-07 . chapter 18Wow. Just wow. Here it is, almost 1 in the morning and I have to be at work in 5 hours. But I couldn't stop reading this. This story was so well written. I laughed, I cried, and got REALLY frustrated (Come ON Kim! Get over it!). Well done. Very well done. |
 ev80 2008-10-10 . chapter 18Wow!
Your story is one of the finest examples of excellent fanfiction around. And I read *way* too much fanfiction.
The attention to detail amazed me... the surgery, the math and physics (fictitious though they were), the collapsed mine, the abandoned world, etc. Usually I read fanfiction in the same sense that I'd look to read "pot boiler" printed fiction - just to pass time without resorting to the evil that is television. But every now and then I unexpectedly stumble across a real jewel like your story! :)
The introspection depicted from Shego and Kim's perspectives were wonderful, too. Extensive introspection (without losing coherency) is something you rarely see in average-quality writing (online or published). I felt myself really relating to Kim, for example, in her shame and guilt over being gay, since that's something I can relate to. I think I would have felt that way even if it hadn't been something I had experience with, though - it was that well done. And Shego's thoughts on how much time she wasted in "the world" by not spending her time wisely, learning useful things was something that really made an impact on me too. Little things like that made it oh-so-easy to slip into the story in an immersive sense.
The incredibly variegated venues (the mine, laboratories, empty world, etc) were amazing, too.
Anyway, I saw your note about trying your hand at publishing something. I just want to encourage you to keep at it, because you definitely have the knack for professional writing :)
Thanks for sharing! |
 yui1808 2008-08-24 . chapter 18can't believe this is really over... thank you so much for uploading this story here... you're such a great author... although i never thought that this story will be this great... sorry about that... hopefully you'll provide us more kigo stories... once again thank you... (bow) |
 Neihaera 2008-08-20 . chapter 1 This makes the third night running I've wound up re-reading the whole story through. Dunno what you will do with completely original characters, but judging from this ... you have an EXCELLENT shot. |
 Random Reviewer 2008-08-09 . chapter 2 Omfg!! Cheyenne Mountain, Stargate! Somehow, even though I had had thoughts of stargate because of the rings and the whole getting stuck in an alternate reality/parellel universe thing...I still hadn't seriously thought it would be involved. XD
Being a huge stargate nerd and a kim possible fan I am twice as psyched about this story than I was before ~_~
Well written so far that I've seen, interesting plot, and fun twists..huzzah! |
 raggle 2008-08-07 . chapter 11 Not sure if I ever reviewed this story, and seeing as it's one of the best kigo stories I've ever read, that seems like a crime. Just wanted to say that I've probably rea this like three or four times, because it's just that amazing. |
 GreenTeaLeafLove 2008-08-05 . chapter 18soo good, seriously love it,. |
 theonewhoforgets 2008-08-02 . chapter 18oh wow. i have to say that this is one of the best stories i have read so far!
you got my first review!
i loved how it was written. and since i am reviewing chapter 18 i have to say, the way you made the reporters back off, hilarious. i mean i had to choke back the laughter to keep from waking everyone up.
haha. |
 Sylverlyf 2008-07-30 . chapter 18I just wanted to say i loved this story i found in on the kp slash site and wanted to drop you a review on it ^^) awsomely done |
 Doggmania 2008-07-24 . chapter 18 I just finished reading your fic, and I have to say its so incredibly awesome. I don't have the words to truly describe how good I thought this was.
It was funny, dramatic, thoughtful and in more that one place tear invoking.
One of the best fanfics I've ever read. |
 anon 2008-06-26 . chapter 15 I just finished your story, and I have to say that this is one of the most well-written Kigo fanfics I have ever had the sweet fortune of reading. You are truly an excellent writer. I take my hat off to you :)
~I was also wondering if by a slight chance you were referring to the Mecha-Tama or just a giant Tama-Chan (flying turtle from Love Hina anime) in chapter 15 when you wrote, “It's been rather quiet lately” Will lied – since Kim had returned from that Other World, Dr. Dementor had tried to unleash a flock of mutant poisonous pigeons in New York city, Monkey Fist had nearly taken over a missile-silo in Nebraska, and DNAmy had threatened Tokyo with something that looked like a giant flying turtle. It had been a busy four months." If you were referring to that, than you truly are my hero^_^ |
 Nutpyro 2008-06-25 . chapter 18I love it, love it, love it! This fic is wonderful! You did it perfectly! You've got the reactions and emotions perfectly how any one will be in those situations! Wonderful job! Keep up the great work! |