col! i love it, it's so creative, you have to update again soon, i want to know what happens next!

please update!

O.O NOO! FIRE! BURNING! DEATH!

Kimiru: ...I thought you liked fire.

Me: JUST BECAUSE I'M A PYROMANIAC DOESN'T MEAN I LIKE READING ABOUT PEOPLE BEING BURNED TO DEATH!

Kimiru: o_O; Down, girl...

*dies* Okay, I'm really sorry, my stupid idiotic computer stopped working and crap...
...Ookay, that's definitely weird...

Kimiru: You can say that again...

Oh o...

Is this girl Atemu's reincarnated wife?

Just had a look at the rest of chapter names and thought of something.

Liana is Tea, right?

Both connected to the beach? Is this girl someone Atemu met when he was Pharaoh?

So Atemu likes to flirt huh? Lol.

Oh o. Poor Liana.

Everyone's prob gotten snappy at Jou cause he asked five hundred times! Lol.

How can he enjoy the hot sands? He must have walked barefoot a lot in Egypt!

Where the hell is Tea!!
Relax Seabreeze...
i hope Tea is in the next chapter!
awesome story update very soon!!
SB

SORRY! JUST GOT A LITTLE CONFUSED. SORRY IF I OFFENDED U OR SOMETHIN. ANYWAY CAN'T WAIT TILL YA UPDATE. ALMOST DONE WITH THE REDONE CHAPTER! CYA!

Good chapter. I'm glad you showed what some of the others are doing.

I liked this chap alot. So am I right when I say Liana is Marie! UPDATE ASAP! Hey I'm in Arizona tomorrow till the 27th of July. I'll try to review but I can't promise. CYA!