|Reviews for Modern Annoyances|
| The Chapter is AWESOME 1/17/09 . chapter 3
this is the best chapter yet, please write more or else i will sue you for abuse of your incredible writing ability, i could even get u an angent if you write enough and you wouldn't need your parents money cause you'll be a multibillionaire! :)
| This chapter is awesome 1/17/09 . chapter 2
i really enjoy your short story and i seriously wanna know what happens next, so please keep writing, the chapter is so awesome i bet even traci harding would be proud.
| anonymous 2/23/07 . chapter 1
Great job. Sorry about this thing i'm gonna post:
this is a true thing that happens! its not a chain letter! its kinda scary at first but it really works! paste this message into 3 comments and press ALT F4 and your crushes name will appear on the screen! its soo wierd!
| rachael's bookshop 2/1/07 . chapter 3
its really good kept going i like it its slowy building up
| xMidnight Angelx 9/13/06 . chapter 2
yay i was so happy to find ancient future fan fics :) not that there are many :(
i cant wait to see where your story goes... i only found the series recently and i read it as fast as i could.
my teachers n grandparents complained so much. every chance i got i ready :) im contemplating reading it again already (i only finished it last week lol)
anyway, love the story, please write more soon,byebye
| yaaaayyyyyy 8/27/06 . chapter 1
WHooa nice story I love the descriptions and stuff
| appletree 7/25/06 . chapter 2
Your story is off to a good begining, even if the idea isn't that original. With the play going on, though, it has the potential to slide into deadly 'High School Musical' territory.
It's a nice touch with the real names of Tory and Brian being Sorcha and Brockwell, however it is a little unbelievable (with Tory at least). Maybe you should clarify how 'Sorcha' got the nickname 'Tory' because it's a fairly big leap.
Also, To Kill A Mockingbird isn't a Shakespeare play. It's not a play at all. It's actually a novel written around fifty years ago by a woman named Harper Lee. Not quite Shakespeare
Please don't take it the wrong way, I'm just lending a hand.
| Corlath 6/13/06 . chapter 2
i really enjoyed the frist two chapters. i just wanted to no why did u give then sorcha and brockwell's names? other then that i followed it perfectly and can't wait for the next chapter.