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| anonymous 2007-02-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat job. Sorry about this thing i'm gonna post: this is a true thing that happens! its not a chain letter! its kinda scary at first but it really works!! paste this message into 3 comments and press ALT F4 and your crushes name will appear on the screen! its soo wierd! |
| rachael's bookshop 2007-02-01 ch 3, | abuseits really good kept going i like it its slowy building up keep writing |
| xMidnight Angelx 2006-09-13 ch 2, | abuseyay i was so happy to find ancient future fan fics :) not that there are many :( i cant wait to see where your story goes... i only found the series recently and i read it as fast as i could. my teachers n grandparents complained so much. every chance i got i ready :) im contemplating reading it again already (i only finished it last week lol) anyway, love the story, please write more soon,byebye xxSaraxx |
| yaaaayyyyyy 2006-08-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseWHooa nice story I love the descriptions and stuff |
| appletree 2006-07-25 ch 2, anon. | abuseYour story is off to a good begining, even if the idea isn't that original. With the play going on, though, it has the potential to slide into deadly 'High School Musical' territory. It's a nice touch with the real names of Tory and Brian being Sorcha and Brockwell, however it is a little unbelievable (with Tory at least). Maybe you should clarify how 'Sorcha' got the nickname 'Tory' because it's a fairly big leap. Also, To Kill A Mockingbird isn't a Shakespeare play. It's not a play at all. It's actually a novel written around fifty years ago by a woman named Harper Lee. Not quite Shakespeare Please don't take it the wrong way, I'm just lending a hand. |
| Corlath 2006-06-13 ch 2, | abusei really enjoyed the frist two chapters. i just wanted to no why did u give then sorcha and brockwell's names? other then that i followed it perfectly and can't wait for the next chapter. |