 Vive Lyf 2006-11-05 . chapter 1XD I found you! Finally got my butt over here to instead of deviantart. I love this little story, so cute in a over-possesive Albel kinda way... my favorite. |
 crematosis 2006-06-25 . chapter 1XD cute little fayt invading the story...my fayt or albel ought to do that...except in albel's case it would just be to complain and i'd have to distract him with fayt to keep him from tearing my story apart...so not a good idea...and if fayt invaded my story...albel would probably chase hima nd tackle him...so not a good idea either...*locks stories from them* anyway...it sounds good. XD fayt and albel are just so...awesome togehter. XD |
 Sharleen the Orc Shaman 2006-05-24 . chapter 1I always like reading your stories :) The story idea and how it's written is awesome! Fayt being used as a 'blanket' for Albel? Kawaii! |
 Riri Yuki 2006-05-24 . chapter 1I love this story! I wish i could show u how i really liked it! I'm playing the game and i'm DYING to get to have Albel on my team already. This just makes me more excited to meet him, and you should delete the extra story, which ever one has less comments |
 Zenphoenixa 2006-05-22 . chapter 1Lol, Peterny scene... fangirl ambrosia, plus the prime reason why so many CliffxFayt advocaters were converted... XD Heh heh, this is a nice naughty twist on the scene (did I just make an oxymoron? LOL) and what I wouldn't give to know what Albel and Fayt got up to after they went back to the inn - if it's anything like what you portrayed, then I'm gonna campaign to see the lost footage. XD
Looks like I'm not the only one who thinks everyone and their pet dog loves Fayt Leingod! XD Heh heh, the thought of Albel showing off his new toyboy in front of everyone makes me laugh very sadistically but hey, it's like what Albel said - first come first served right? >:D Fayt's little interjection in the story made me laugh too but he can't deny it... I bet his inner child is a fangirl trying to break free. XD Anyway good job, and kudos on building up a very healthy collection of AlbelxFayt fics! :D |
 5540 2006-05-21 . chapter 1What? You doubled posted? Oh well, it's okay we all make mistakes.
But Seriously...words cannot describe how much I love this story!
I love the way you depict Albel, he's so in character!
You had a couple of spelling errors...{apiffiny=epiphany?}
and in one of the last lines it should say [I want to play a game] but that's me being nitpicky.
Again though...great fic! |