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| Morgan5318 2008-01-06 ch 1, | abuse"He waited for the first sign of gold rising in the east." What a beautiful ending, and so poignant. This was another great story, and I really enjoyed reading it. Having just undergone 8 days without power in the dead of winter, I can sympathize with F'ren about the cold. But this was beautifully written, and a sheer pleasure to read. The more I read about F'ren, the more I want to know about him. I really want to see him become a Weyrleader. So much. |
| Lady Whimsy 2007-08-30 ch 1, | abuseYou did a great jb. I hope you write more. |
| Au Printemps 2007-06-03 ch 1, | abuseWell written, made interesting. However, the vulgarities are pretty Terran, aren't they? |
| Rimmersworld 2006-12-20 ch 1, | abuseYou made this story interesting, in the attention to detail. Your ability to create an additional "picture" or facet of life at the weyr is very good. Your telling of the story is much like reading Anne McCaffrey herself. Good job. |
| Kitsuneko 2006-12-20 ch 1, | abuseNice. I love all the little insights into Weyrlife you included that nobody ever seems to think about. I especially liked the images of weyrlings mounting their dragons for the first time. :D |
| GinaLee 2006-09-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseInteresting character - what happens next? Thanks for the story!! |
| curiouswombat 2006-08-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseThank you. This is a lovely insight into day to day life in the weyr, and just enough to whet the appetite for what makes F'ren a threat to Sh'vek, and leave me wanting more - always the sign of a good writer! |
| CrossoverQueen 2006-06-04 ch 1, | abuseThis is so fascinating, and yet nothing's happened at all. They're just standing there on the ridge in the dark. It takes a good writer to pull that off. |
| lilybee 2006-05-26 ch 1, | abuseThis had better not be a stand alone. For please! tell me what did he do to piss his wingleader off? Love this. It is so nice to read something that puts the whole place into reality, the boring aspects of weyr life. Though there was nothing remotely boring about this. Knew there was a reason I have you on my author alert, this proves it. Keep up the excellent work. |
| Mockingbird 2006-05-24 ch 1, anon. | abusePretty good. I like the concept. Always did wonder what the watchrider actually did. It did really have that kind of feel to it, like you didn't know exactly what you were doing, just putting in stuff when you needed something to happen. I could be wrong on this, but it just seemed that way. But still, well-written, and good idea. I liked it, really. |