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Reviews For: Common Sense

AlexaFlame 2008-06-03 ch 1,	abuseGreat work! You managed to make the lesson sound like a real class and at the same time everything being said related perfectly to the letter. Plus it was funny at parts. Eg: "“Good God,” he muttered as he scuffed at the floor with his foot. “I didn’t know I was such a suck-up.”" So well done :P
corcrafields 2006-10-01 ch 1,	abuseAW! bursts into tears That was brilliant! I think I love you. You're so good at making all this believable. Lancitty all the way! YOU ROCK!
Meh 2006-06-12 ch 1, anon.	abuseWell done. I like the ending.
prydep 2006-06-10 ch 1,	abuseA new fan fiction archive just for Lane/Kitty has been created. You're invited to register and upload your fiction at Let's get all the fans united! ;)
The Reader 2006-06-05 ch 1, anon.	abuseLove it, love it! I was really attracted by the Common Sense title because I love that essay by Thomas Paine. It's one of the best pieces of revolutionary lit. I think. Really well-written, and an impressive amount of history facts thrown in. Lance's letter was italicized at some points and then non-italicized in others, so that was confusing. Otherwise, that's my only complaint. Great job.
Casakitten 2006-06-05 ch 1,	abuseI don't like Lancitty, but I liked this. It was very well written, and entertaining.
Gylfie 2006-06-01 ch 1,	abuseHm... Liked the quotes entwined in the story, and I thought Lance was very well-developed and in-character.
The different 2006-05-24 ch 1, anon.	abuseVery nice work. It was short and sweet. Nice pairing as well. The different
DOJ 2006-05-23 ch 1,	abuseThat was cute ^_^ It's been quite awhile since I've read a decent Lancitty fic, so I'm glad I stumbled across yours. Mixing in Paine's "Common Sense" was a nice touch, it fit neatly with what you were trying to convey. And I loved Lance's reaction at the end, it was just so...Lance. Nice work ^_^ ~~DOJ~~
sharkies 2006-05-22 ch 1,	abusevery cute

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