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wateveruwannacallme
2007-09-10
ch 6,
abuseNice stories update more!
Shezel
2007-07-26
ch 6, anon.
abuseHm interesting developments kag's is in some kind of a coma and her spirit seems to be connected to sesshoumaru. Well update soon wanna see where your taking this laterz!
FallenAngel92
2007-07-23
ch 6,
abuseI really like this story! Please update soon! U r my fave author!
I move the stars for no one
2007-07-15
ch 6,
abusegood job it keeps my intrest please update soon
Sincerely a deovted fan and muse
SeruleanOrbs
2007-07-13
ch 2,
abuseWell since you were asking for more reviews for this story, and since I like it well enough, and I'm on a roll...


Ah! ::craddles Sesshou in her arms:: What is it with people butchering Sesshou today?? You had him blinded?! My poor, poor baby. But glad that he is still very independent. At this point in time, how much time as elapsed since the accident? Is the one year's time over? (how old is he?) Somehow I can't believe that it would be, that he would remain as he is. (Is he totally sightless, or can he still see colors? If he can't how then does he chooses his different rim-colored glasses?) I can't believe that Kagome in her supernatural state would not be able to do something, however inadvertantly. (Maybe there's a piece of glass that was never removed from his orbs that prevent his eyes from healing?)
It would be sad if he never learns how Kagome looks like. Or never sees her talent for acting. Hasn't he ever wondered what such a spit-fire would look like?


Oh, and I like that Rin is her age,too, and fast becoming her best friend, instead of Sango. That would be too...boring. And Sango has an attitude too! Initially, when I read the first chapter, I thought you would have her go to a boot camp of some sort to get her attitude adjusted. o_o LOl Glad I was wrong.
Oh, and congrats on getting a ** Kagome down, without it being to obnoxious to read. I've seen other attempt it, and it just was not appealing to read, nor plausible.
SeruleanOrbs
2007-07-13
ch 6,
abuseHow pleased am I with this, I can't rightly say. Original too! I like that Rin had enough spunk in her to knock Kagome down a peg or two, but that you smartly reverted her back to her original disposition. It would have bn too strange and ackward for the lil' girl to hate someone. Kagome though, what a B!

About her father pushing his hopes and dreams on her, that happens all too often, ne? Don't they realize how much damage that can cause, that it can rival not caring for your child's future, psychologically?
You're developing your characters well. Interesting twist that she has asthma, if you think about how physically demanding the role Kagome plays in the anime. I don't think I've ever came across a fic where she had this condition.
Che-chan
2007-07-12
ch 6,
abuseI'm so glad you finally updated this. ;D Although I was a little surprised in the direction the story took~
It reminds me of the movie "A lot Like Heaven."
That movie with Reese Witherspoon~ Have you seen it?
Animealover
2007-07-11
ch 6,
abuseLove it! Update soon please!
Spirit of Insanity
2007-07-04
ch 5,
abuseMeep...0.0 Poor kagome. What happend to her? Why is she in Sesshomaru's room?? WHEN WILL YOU UPDATE? So many questions...
beauty
2007-06-28
ch 5, anon.
abuseyour so evil it's getting really good please update soon
noro
2007-06-14
ch 5,
abuseMAKE MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE I REALLY REALLY LIKE THIS STORY!
LeafeKnight7
2007-05-21
ch 5,
abuse...Well...*cough* thats a...*snort* pretty interesting spot to leave off...I'm sorry...I'm cracking up right now...for reasons unknown but you know my head...haha. ^_^Ja ne!
inuyashas-1gurl
2007-04-04
ch 5,
abuseheh, kinda funny but kinda sad. Poor Kagome. So anyway please continue!
Shezel
2007-03-16
ch 5, anon.
abuseYes what a cliffie is kags dreaming about sessh or is she really in his room interesting. Well dont keep us hanging wanna see what happens will this dream cause kags to wake up or sleep more hehehe ^_^ laterz!
Che-chan
2007-03-13
ch 5,
abuseWhat, what? o.o The ending totally threw me off. So Kagome is in a coma or something in the hospital? But her ghost/spirit somehow transported to Sesshoumaru's room, and he can hear her.
I must be going crazy.
Awesome chapter though.

And yes, nice place to leave it off. -rolls eyes-

xD
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