 Foxfairy11 2009-10-17 . chapter 10omg. that ending made me cry!! i so wasn't expecting it either.. but I really did love the story. :) |
 Bamboo Tora 2009-09-12 . chapter 10*twitches* That last chapter you just drove me up this hill of feel good and then dumped me into the pits of sadness on the other side. It was like the Power Tower of chapters. I really really wanted him to live, but you made me cry. Though I do agree that any other ending would not have wrapped up your story so well. It gave it a beautiful haunting feel along with bringing several things in the story full circle.
Excuse me *sniffles* I need to go read a happy fluffy story to get rid of residual sad funk. |
 Kags21 2009-09-05 . chapter 10Great story |
 Kags21 2009-09-05 . chapter 9Sad to see this go |
 DemonDeReves 2009-08-31 . chapter 10that... made me cry...it was a great and well thought out fic but god that was sad at the end |
 Violent Pacifist 2009-08-20 . chapter 10my first thought: holy CRAP. I've always wanted an ending like that, because when people live and everything is 'happily ever after' i get disappointed from such expected endings. When I was reading the last chapter, I didn't get it at first. Then I realized and got so damn excited. I know it isnt nice, but i do not like expected. Surprises are so much more interesting.
This fanfiction is absolutely wonderful. The plot seems kind of familiar but the story itself is unique and amazing. I loved Kagome's sarcastic character and I miss it, but if i was ever treated like that i would totally think 'wow, she's a **'.
That was such a perfect read. Thank you :]
-Violent Pacifist ;D |
 Violent Pacifist 2009-08-20 . chapter 9This is one hell of a story. I was iffy about reading this at first, but the first chapter was really unique to me. I got hooked. I'm also attracted to those self-loathing kind of stories. I, of course, don't hate myself, but I feel like I understand their feelings. Well, only if the writing is good enough, which yours obviously was.
This fanfic was very interesting and it just seems so perfect. I can't wait for the ending.
Thanks for the brilliant story. You write amazingly.
-Violent Pacifist ;D |
 Sourichan 2009-08-13 . chapter 10I can't belive that he dies! I really wanted him to live, but you are right. The ending is more beautiful this way. |
 Tales Reign 2009-08-12 . chapter 10:'( I hate you for ending that way! *angrily pouts*
but I also love you for writing this story lol. I hated it as well in the begining. man was kag's a ** and a snob. turned me off this story completely but i made myself finish reading it and i'm glad i did.
It was excellent! ^_^
For some reason I thought It'd be longer, and have a bit more meat to it, though it was 10 chapters i somehow feel as though i've just read a one-shot.
not to offend you or anything but that's just how i feel. ?_'
*Cough* Sequel *COUGH* *COUGH*
lol |
 UnDead Warrior Phil 2009-08-12 . chapter 10ok im really sorry but i have no idea what just happened. PLEASE PLEASE HELP. but other then that awesome story :D |
 inu-babe34 2009-08-12 . chapter 10Well I hope ur happy, you've reduced me to tears. But good tears...I think. This story really caught my interest and I read it non-stop until it was complete. You really caught me off guard with the ending though, I SO didn't expect him to die!! That's probably what's mostly behind my tears, but also the happiness? Don't ask me, cuz i don't even have a clue about why I think there's any happiness to this. Anyways, I think my tear-enduced rambling is FINALLY over. This story really was original and I enjoyed it immensly, as I'm sure others have and will. You're definatly one of my favorite writers, and I can't wait to read more of what you dish out! Till next time, later! |
 Yuti-Chan 2009-08-11 . chapter 10That was an awesome story :D |
 darkangel0212 2009-08-11 . chapter 10are you going to put up a sequel up i really like this story |
 yumchaitea 2009-08-11 . chapter 10The ending was truly wonderful. Even if it did make me a little sad :) |
 WiccanMethuselah 2009-08-11 . chapter 10OMG... that was SO angsty. I cried. A bunch. You had us all guessing right up to the very end, though, that's for sure!
You can be proud of your prowess to move people to laughter or tears just with your words. It is not a talent that all possess, but you seem to have MORE than your share of it!!
Again, thank you so much for a thoroughly enjoyable (albeit somewhat tear-stained) read!
:D
~~Wiccan~~ |