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DD2
2007-05-28
ch 58,
abuseGreat fic! I hope you continue soon! I just discovered it and read it all, you are a great writer! Please Update Soon!
77517
2007-02-08
ch 58,
abuseI love how you sent Amy to St. Peter's. Can her parents already tell she's going to be a little hellion as a teenager?

"Catlin had a boiled egg and was dipping her toast into it" - I love her similarity to Nathan.

The part about Mrs. Higgins asking Catlin to make a necklace was so cute.

"She was told that the little girl was having a great time and that she had stopped crying the second Mac left." - Oh good.

"It’s not pasta this time… I got to make it from real beads!" - Aww, so cute

"Catlin: BUT I WANT IT NOW!!
She was furiously banging her fist against Macs desk and kicking it with her little legs." - What a brat.
nalaa
2007-02-06
ch 58,
abuseYou already know, but I have to say it again: I love little Catlin! She's so cute when she wants.

Great chapter :)
Kikidevil17
2007-02-06
ch 58,
abuseHey, this new chapter was so good!! Catlin in pre-school was adorable and I left so bad for Mac because she had to leave her little girl!! I really enjoy this story because it show Mac as a mother and all she has to go thru. GOOD JOB WITH THIS STORY!! I LOVE IT!! KEEP US POSTED!!
Kikidevil17
2007-01-30
ch 57,
abuseHi, I just finish this story and I love it!! It was so good, I was also wondering if you were going to continue it, I think you should because the story is magnificant!! I think you are a magnificant author, keep writting please!!
77517
2006-08-20
ch 57,
abuseI loved the visual of Catlin with the tambourine.

"Catlin and Amy wanted to go with her, so that Horace and Becca would clean up the mess." - HA!

"Amy: How did it get there?
Catlin: Did you eat it?" - This is priceless.

"Mac: No honey, Kelly never ate a baby." - But this is even better. Yay for jokes about eating babies. Eww, now I've got disgusting ideas in my head for a CiC fan fiction that I'll never write.

I loved this part: "Amy: Why is your son so old?"

I loved the part with the Pepsi Max and the way Becca was scared of rollercoasters.

I loved that the little girls and Mac scared Rod at the end.
Evil Cowplant
2006-08-19
ch 57,
abuseAw, this chapter makes me want to visit London again.
Lara Cox
2006-08-13
ch 56,
abuseI'm so glad Liz is home again! That will do her a lot of good!

Her letter was so sad! I can understand why she felt that way... she suffered so much, poor girl.
77517
2006-08-13
ch 56,
abuseOMG I can't believe you had Kate appear to Elizabeth.

"when I am dead all the pain will finally be gone and I won't be a burden on you any more" - This line was so heartbreaking.

Aww, it was so nice that the kids made a big deal about her coming home. The Welcome Home banners were a nice touch.

I really hope Elizabeth gets better in future chapters.
77517
2006-08-09
ch 55,
abuse"Mac thought and remembered that Warren's daughter had took her own life and left a son for his Grandparents to watch" - I'm glad that someone finally came up with an explanation for that mystery.

I'm glad she let them read the letters. I'd like to know what they say.

"Catlin started to scream the place down, and kept shouting about ice cream" HA!
Lara Cox
2006-08-08
ch 55,
abuseGood chapter!
Why wasn't Elizabeth alowed to watch TV, use the internet or listen to the radio? Is because the doctors think it could depress her even more? I'm just curious because I don't know how those things work in real life...

I'm glad you included Warren a little bit... We never knew how his daugther ("The Doctor who herself became a patient") actually died... but what you said is very posible... my theory about it was that she had AIDS. But now that I read this I think that she could have commited suicided because she was clinicaly depressed... maybe she was even maniac-depresive and Warren didn't want anybody to know.
77517
2006-08-04
ch 54,
abuse"Rod never liked to show it, but he was very sensitive." I can believe that!

I wondered if she'd read the letters when she took them. I liked her reason not to.

"Catlin: I am going to make her a necklace, Mommy can we have some pasta, I can paint them pretty colours" - Ha! I'm sure she'll love it though.
77517
2006-08-04
ch 53,
abuseIt’s good she’s getting a psychiatric evaluation. I wonder if she’ll need to be institutionalized.

“Kelly: I announced that I was Pregnant to take some heat off of Elizabeth” – That was good of her.
77517
2006-08-04
ch 52,
abuseI can’t believe Amy was starting with the “You stole Mommy and Daddy from us.” Usually it was just Becca.

Wow, the senior staff took Kelly’s pregnancy pretty well.

Elizabeth attempts suicide? Oh my goodness. It’s obvious she won’t die, though.
77517
2006-08-04
ch 51,
abuse“Catlin: You have really pretty nails, can you paint mine for me” – Aww! It’s funny to imagine Rod having to save Nora from someone else rather than someone else saving Rod from Nora for a change!

“Rod, Amy and Catlin spent the day in the garden playing in the garden” – Aww, so sweet!

“she moaned at Rod until he took them off her bike” – Ha! She’s going to fall down and get all scraped up and scream and cry. :)

“Dickie: I was thinking, instead of us moving in together I can move to your building that way we are close” – That is a really good idea and very sweet of him to do. He may surprise us all and be a good dad.

Aww, poor Catlin with the bedwetting.
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