Another great story! Very sentimental, very touching, also true to BOTH source materials ("Mary" and "The Rat From Perfecto"). The only thing was, it seemed like too serious of a story to have the funny bloopers at the end, but I'll cope. ("a bag of cookies is suddenly thrown out of the bathroom...")

Good story of Rubelle POV

Hey, sorry I took a while to get back to you on this, but I have to admit that you did a great job on this piece. I definitely have to salute you. :-D

Excelente historia! Llena perfectamente todos los detalles sobre como Monty preparó la cacería, y la reacción de Rhubella. Muy intenso, con una excelente descripción.

Me alegra que mi historia te haya servido. Gracias.

Keep the good writing.