I thought the characterisation was spot on, myself. It's nice to see things that are both IC and well-written popping up! And for my favourite pairing, which makes things much more pleasant~

Nice job, and I liked the read! Rin's personality can be difficult to nail down sometimes, but I think you did a nice job. Thanks for sharing. ^^

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"I know the plot is weak, and the characterization is off. I fully expect to be criticized on those topics."

Don't sell yourself short damnit! This was good, very good! Very In character, Very Plausible! We don't get much of an insight as to what Rin was/would be feeling after Archer's defeat, but if I had to guess, I'd say your's fitted perfectly!

OOCness for these characters would be Rin gushing out undying love and Emiya trying to go for a night of pity-sex. Your's thankfully had neither! Good luck in the future!

Great story, is this an expansion on Unlimited BW? and to the guy who's sad that Archer dies, you don't have to worry since Archer = Shiro.

Really good+cute!

I thought it was fine. :D

OOCness? That was probably the most IC fic I've read in the last month. Very refreshing. There's a bright future for this fandom.

Props to you, well done.

-Da Plague

It's a little sad that Archer must die... *cries*

Nonetheless, don't get too upset or whatever. It's great, and it's worth reading =]

Write more Fate/Stay night fics! We need a new category for their fics here ToT

I think you did portray Rin well, and in-character here. OOC would've been if she had gone all lovey-dovey with Shiro (which then would've made the story all the more interesting). But seeing as this is a character sketch of Rin (I'm supposing it is), it works better as is.
I wonder...is being Shiro/Rin unconventional? Haha...a lot of others kinda prefer Saber as a pairing; I'm actually torn somewhat on that myself.
Anyways, good job! Hopefully there'll be more Shiro/Rin fics in the future *hint*hint* ^_^

OOC-ness? Where? *looks around for it in vain*

Rin was written pretty well. As we got to look into her head very little anyway, I'd say she was written perfectly. What evidence is there that you wrote her wrong, after all? ^_~ Her heart isn't made of stone, despite what she likes to make others think, and I think you portrayed that very well.

I thought it was pretty good. I always though Rin was a much better character than Sabre who was very poor.

cool story! yay! I love FateStay Night- amazing series. episode 14 was so sad! I really liked this story good job!

*whistles* ooh... impressive... i like it...

T_T it didn't even end with rin/shirou...

wah

It was a good story. After all it's not like she had to feel bad about what happened. Archer made his choice and he had plenty of chances to escape if he had wanted to. There wasn't really many other choices available to her, if anyone should regret what happened it should be Shirou. That guy is always getting caught.

I still can't believe that Shirou and Saber killed Berserker with one attack, 1 hit=7kills? What on earth? Still a nice story though.

Ah, finally, finally, an F/SN story that's *not* shoujo-ai!

To tell the truth, I'm a little disappointed with the story, mainly because I am the

MOST DIEHARD

Shirou/Saber fan you'll find (she's too damn hot!) in the F/SN community (at least here on

Anyway, I didn't think Rin was OOC at all... I mean, it was clear there that she was putting on a facade for the benefit of Shirou and Saber after Archer had been terminated.

Unfortunately, the anime kinda... eliminated all mention of Archer after episode 15, which sucked MAJORLY, and Rin herself became a much less significant character afterwards too.

But hey, I'll take what I can get for an F/SN story.

- Phantom Kensai