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| moritynz 2008-10-03 ch 1,  | abuseVery interesting idea... I did wonder how well it could be done in such a short story but it was good... not pergect but good. |
| Tovath 2008-07-09 ch 1, | abuseI don't care how many times I read this, it always is enjoyable. |
| Golden Arms 2008-05-27 ch 1, | abuseThat's some wild stuff. I can't begin to imagine the amount of work this took up, but it's clearly present. I'd only wish there were more to this, going over in detail all the things thet they'd had to endure, especially the period when Haruka gives Ranma permission to date her lady. That would be a tale in and of itself, I wager. |
| masaki yang yi1 2008-02-26 ch 1, | abuseInterestiong and a bit dark in place's but good nontheless. |
| Meca Vegeta 2007-05-31 ch 1, | abusewoah... awesome |
| Sub-Zero879 2007-03-15 ch 1, | abuseI'm surprised this didn't get more reviews... It's an exellent story. I always like Haruka/Ranma paring stories, adn this is close enough. Well... Wir Trennen. |
| TegwenielWestwind 2007-01-13 ch 1, | abuseSuch an odd story, but I liked it. The summary format worked well, though I would have loved to have actually delved into more of those moments and watch the characters grow closer and experience life. Thank you for writing. |
| deitarion/SSokolow 2006-12-25 ch 1, | abuseI always love to see a well-written Ranma-SM crossover. :) |
| Drifter950 2006-12-02 ch 1, | abusea nice, conveluted, and strange story line that used the cannon anime of both, beautifully. Thank you for good read. May the MUSE be with you! |
| Kadunta 2006-09-24 ch 1, | abuseAn enjoyable read and an original idea. If there's one thing I might want to change in this fic, it would be to adjust the proportion of Setsuna's ponderings and the tale of Ranma and Haruka a bit to make one of them the obvious focus. Now the attention felt in my opinion evenly divided between the two, which might've required both parts to be fleshed out in a bit greater detail to carry the fic a bit better. |
| GeorgeTobor 2006-08-23 ch 1, | abuseA unique story. That you can write an original Ranma/Senshi story is wonderful. I'm adding it to my favorite list. |
| I am the Bane of my Sword 2006-08-22 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. |
| dogbertcarroll 2006-08-10 ch 1, | abuseFortunately, Ranma passed out during the event leaving Haruka to handle it by herself. *snicker* A little too much tell and too little show, but nice work all the same. |
| Trahloc 2006-07-23 ch 1, | abuseHah, another good one. You seem to have perfected the art of giving the least bit of info to cause the greatest amount of imagination :) |
| keichan2 2006-07-19 ch 1, | abuseThis is an interesting story! At the end, I hesitated between wanting it in multiple chapters, to have more details in some parts, and wanting it to stay as it is. I still can't choose, but it's a good job. |