that was really short, sweet, and to the point. it was nice.

How sweet.

Watch out for the casual language in between the really poetic stuff. It ruins the mood just a little bit.

Excellent piece, altogether.

cutee
^_^

This honestly wasn't what I expected when I first read the summary ... it was better! Cute, a little angsty, and ... well, cute! I can't wait to read your upcoming story; I'm sure it will be quite popular!

Aw...so fluffy...

Cute fluff! Rosette is always yelling at poor chrono.