A well-written, satisfying piece! Hope you've written more DA!

Awesome story and nice ending

Great story!!

lol, good fic,
i wish dark angel was still on
*sigh*
Xsarahx

Very very good - really enjoyed reading this fic :)

Hehe! That was great! Very in-character and the Max/Alec dynamic was closer to the canon than I thought possible! Really loved the ending :) Well done!

Hi! I loved this! funny, and serious! I liked your writing! I hope Alec will be o.k... so, is this going to have chap 2? I really hope so! so update? plz? ;)

I loved your dialogue. I don't think I've read a piece which captures the balane between the three so well. Their attitudes, their tones and their mannerisms. You hit the mark better than anything else I've read.

I don't think you got the tryptophan explanation quite right; it makes sense but the reason Max's unit broke out in the first place was because she had the seizures bad enough to warrant being dragged off so in context of her character, it doesn't work.

Still, the rest of the story was good enough for me not to even really bother with that inconsistency except that you explicitly drew attention to it lol.

Hehehe Great story. I felt pretty sorry for Alec... Anyway, I really enjoyed it, great job!

This was fun. I like M/A verbal sparring matches, and you wrote this well.

No good explanation.

I love your Max! She's awesome in this!

i loved it! i like how you went into detail with the reason for the seizures. yours does seem to make sense for some reason!