very cute

Cute fic. Liked the ending.

Wow, this is very masterfully done! Your writing style was superb, and the story was captivating. Great Job!

Simply beautiful. Your style is very sweet, and very welcoming. I'm happy I found this piece. KohakuKagome is rarely done, and you've pulled it off nicely. Great work!

Ohaiyo!

My again ¬¬U I want to translate it... Do you give me permission? please? (puppy eyes *.*)

Ohaiyo!

I love your fic and I want to translate it... Do you give me permission? Do you care?

KagomeKohaku, eh? An interesting pairing, and even more interesting is the way you've written them.

This is very characteristic of the type of writing you've grown fond of writing recently, and, as usual, it's very thought-provoking and simply, yet beautifully worded.

You've left a lot for the reader to assume -- I'm not going to bore you by listing my assumptions, but it *does* set up a nice and convenient premise for the fic. Not much to say as per plot, but those little snippets tracked their growing relationship nicely. Kudos.

And... just where do you get all those lovely metaphors from? I especially loved the last one. Nothing like a wonderful last line to round off a good fic.

Grammar and spelling wise, I couldn't spot any mistakes.

I'm not really a great fan of the pairing (or anything to do with Kohaku, honestly), so maybe this didn't impress me as much as it *should* have, but it *is* a wonderful piece of fanfic. I can tell that writing a pairing like this and pulling it off convincingly is a tough task. Good job.

Manga is... weird. o_O

Take care, and Keep Writing!

Wow. I loved this story. It was amazing. I've never thought of a Kagome/Kohaku fic before, and if so, it probably would've seemed wrong...but this is execellent. The style flows so beautifully and the words give you a sort of sweet melancholy feel.

Well done!

Wow I liked this story a lot. Kohaku and Kagome pairings are not often done but somehow you managed to make it work. Check out this story called Mistakes Change Everything on mediaminer. it's also a kohaku and kagome pairing. This is a great story by the way. I love your stlye of writing it

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