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| Hijitaka 2007-07-28 ch 1, | abuseVery nice. Who knew something like this could be pulled out of nowhere? Well anyway, good job with this fanfic |
| Ms. Chidori Sagara 2007-04-13 ch 1, | abuse:o that was, pointless. Kidding it's so cute |
| GoldFighter88 2006-11-08 ch 1, | abuseI like your use of vocabulary- it adds flavor to the fic. I also think you did a nice job in capturing Norn's childish demeanor. Nice job. The thought of a drunken Lita makes me happy. |
| josh 2006-10-27 ch 1, anon. | abusethat was a great fic please write more fic's |
| Teefa and Co 2006-05-25 ch 1, | abuseAll Girls: Del~sus! Teefa: Hilarious, heh Lita is crazy when she's drunk. Funny thing though, I just got this scene last night when I was playing. Lufia: Klein my boy, you're one lucky guy getting kissed by a girl like that. Rutee: Oh, you're that forward with your boyfriend without being drunk Lu. Lufia: That's why I say he's lucky. Teefa: *meow* Nice fun little story. |
| Griffinkhan 2006-05-23 ch 1, | abuseKlein/Lita is a really cute pairing, even if they are both incredibly dense. ;) Thanks for writing this. |
| TRUE_Unknown 2006-05-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really thought that this was a neat fic. And yes, Lita IS an angry and jealous woman, who in my only opinion, should learn to take a chill pill, and calm all the heck down. Anyway, yes, this is a nice fic. Please check my Atelier Iris 2 fic here, and let me know what you think of it. |
| Macky 2006-05-23 ch 1, | abuseNice story. |
| Kusabi Makabe 2006-05-22 ch 1, | abuseNice. I like Klein and Lita together, although I kind of wonder how he can be that oblivious. The lopsided hat was a nice touch. :) |