Hey, I really enjoyed this, there were some really good moments in it. The elloquence of the fiction impressed me a lot, you don't get as many people as you like on ff, who really think about how to structure, and phrase stuff, because it really does make a difference.

Nice job.

I absolutely loved, loved, loved the Cole part, it was brilliant. Maybe you should have left the drake part out though, some things are best left unsaid.

wow...great work! i loved this ending, its much better then the actual one! god job!

Thanks for writing this. This remake solves the key issues I had with the finale; it's written in a style true to the original, well-paced and gotta love the hug-fest and the whole legacy theme. XD Brilliant job!

Great Idea... I really didn't like the last episode except for Chris and Wyatt coming back but i felt everyone should be back or at least respectfully mentioned.

Nice chapter

That was great. I wish it could have played out. I loved how you included Cole. The Prue and Andy was so sweet!

I agree this was a way better ending. Even though Coop made me sick! There were all IC!

Blessed Be

-JJ

I love the story. It was amazing, I especially like the Prue/Paige sisterly bonding aspect

Oh so sweet...

this is so great. you should make a sequal. This is what should have happened in the show. What they should have done is Andy and Prue get married hevan. (or however it is spelled)

Hey there! Lauren here. I hope you're doing well. I jsut read hte sequel or rewrite you wrote for "Forever Charmed." I really liked it! It was really good! Although I would have thought Piper would have told Paige she loved her during a moment just for them, but your idea was good too. I hope to read more from you soon! Also, Colleen is one of my favorite names. It actually holds a very special place in my heart. One of my best friends was named Colleen and she helped me during a time I needed it the most.

Lauren

That was great, except I'm confused at waht happend to Phoebe and Cole's son. Will she ever see him again? I love how you had them all see their futures and have three children each.

OMG i cant believe i hadnt read this story yet! It so awesome. I love how they went forward in time to see their futures.

Beautifully done, love the idea of Phoebe having a child with Cole. Anxious to see how you resolve this, and the idea of Phoebe knowing that out there she has a son.

Very, very nicely done, 4Ever! A LOT better than just the quick glimpses on the show! Don't you REALLY think that it should've been two hours long, like most series finales are?

I loved all the names and the reasons for the names and I absolutely adored who you chose for each Charmed Ones' guide and the relationship each had!

Once more, girl, absolutely fanastically wonderful job! Thank you so much for writing it and sharing it with all of us!

Oh, 4Ever, an absolutely totally fantastically wonderful chapter! This is truly how Phoebe's wedding should've gone rather than that quick glimpse that we saw on the show! And having Melinda Warren doing the ceremony was the frosting on the cake, as was Prue and Andy and the Morrisses, all people who truly should've been part of it. It makes me wish you had Paige do a flashback to her own wedding and let us see how very much better that actually was than the rush job the show was!

I can't WAIT to see how you end this! On to the next!