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| unknown 2007-01-10 ch 28, anon. | abusewhoa i love it. |
| Muddy Poodle 2006-08-13 ch 4, | abuseHi, thanks for responding to my last comment! :D And I wasn't trying to be like, "You stole that line!" I was like, "Whoa, I can totaly picture him saying something like that!" b/c I saw the movie. lol And the idea that you came up with that on your own is pure genius. :D |
| Muddy Poodle 2006-08-12 ch 3, | abuse"'You, do ask women out...right?' Michael's eyes widened. 'Wha-? Yeah. Yes! Of course I do!' Sydney nodded her head. 'Women, yes, lots of women.'" Was that line inspired by Vartan's line from Monster-in-Law? 'Cause if it was...I love it :D |
| Nade-san 2006-08-07 ch 3, | abuseWow! Your story is really great! I´ve just started reading it, but I really like it. And sorry my english ^^... I don´t use to speak it, I usually speak spanish hahaha. Bye! |
| Shniblet47 2006-07-25 ch 28, | abuseThis was a great story. I look forward to reading more of your work... Yay!! I'm back.. I know you missed me... ~Shniblet47 |
| vaughnfan 2006-07-13 ch 28, | abuseOh my gosh! That was great. There's a sequel coming up isn't there? I mean, you can't leave us with Sydney's hand on the other side of the glass, can you? No! Please write a sequel! Nice story though mate, and I can't wait to read more of your stuff. cheers |
| jeyton4ever 2006-07-09 ch 28, | abuseOMG!! Sydney can't be dead. She just can't be. She is sydney. Her and Vaughn are supposed to live happily ever after! I can't believe that. The ending was a bit unexpected, but good non the less. You did a great job. Keep up the good work. I wish that sydney had lived though. That would have been awsome. |
| ZanessaTroyellaHSM 2006-07-09 ch 28, | abuseWow! That was a great story. PLEASE write a sequel. However I'm a little lost. What happened when Will said you won't believe it and who's hand was it? Did Sydney have that ring? I'm lost! HELP! pleasee |
| ArodLoverus2001 2006-07-08 ch 28, | abuseOMG that was so messed up! really hope u do a sequel where syd & vaughn can be together! keep up the great work. |
| Carmel March 2006-07-08 ch 28, | abuseOH MY GOD! How could you end it like that? ARE YOU CRAZY? Hehe, sorry, I just can't believe it! AH! In addition to reviewing the last chapter, I would just like to thank you for writing this story. It was absolutely fantastic and one of my faves on the whole site. :) Hope to see more from you soon! Thanks! ~carm~ |
| Carmel March 2006-07-08 ch 27, | abuseWow! That was so exciting! So Sydney is sacrificing herself for the greater good, huh? Just like Syd :) Update soon! Super soon! ~carm~ |
| Carmel March 2006-07-06 ch 26, | abuseHey! I am so so sorry I haven't reviewed sooner! I've been away and not near a computer! But now I've got myself into an internet cafe to review :) The story is still fantastic! Great chapters! Your writing has a flow I've never seen before. It makes the story just that much more interesting. Sorry again! And update soon! ~carm~ |
| irionelissa 2006-07-04 ch 25, | abuseYou lost me with the Zombies. |
| jeyton4ever 2006-07-01 ch 25, | abuseI just started reading the story today, and I really like it. I can't wait till the next update. I am so happy that Sydney and Michael are together. They are just so cute. Well anyway. Please UPDATE ASAP! |
| irionelissa 2006-06-26 ch 23, | abuseok, I'm lost. At the beinging of this chapter julian was lost then you get no reaction from Syd when he walks into the room after he is lost, what is going on? |