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| NarutoPhantom 2008-05-24 ch 6,  | abuseI love this story |
| Bloodcloud 2008-04-02 ch 6, | abuseomg, an awesome story, i hope you will update soon. you've got me watching x-men all over again. I WANT MORE! i need to know what happens, i'm addicted! |
| nejitenfan 2007-11-01 ch 5, | abusewho were the two wolfeine killed and a shurkien can have 3 or more points in naruto it is usally 4 points though in one episode therre was a 3 point one |
| nejitenfan 2007-11-01 ch 6, | abuseupdate soon |
| pie 2007-08-16 ch 5, anon. | abusehi^^ umm just to tell you kun means beloved san means to respect^^ hmm..oh ans sama means master^^lol chan means cute also.umm san means respect for both genders |
| charmunclefeeblix-san 2007-07-03 ch 6, anon. | abuseplease update soon |
| Fulcon 2007-06-15 ch 5, | abuseAdding to favorites really quick... |
| Fulcon 2007-06-15 ch 6, | abusePlease...update...SOON! X-MEN BETTER GET THERE SOON! |
| Minxmessenger 2007-04-11 ch 6, | abuseHope you update soon |
| kirallie 2006-10-07 ch 6, | abuseOkay so there are mutants around Team 7 and ninja near the X-men. In the summary you say the X-men are warped into another dimension, has that happened yet or is there a bit of travel with different groups going on? Hope Logan finds the others and fast. Poor Team 7! |
| Azalie-Kauriu 2006-10-07 ch 6, | abuseCool story! wat r the pairs? Update ASAP PLZ! |
| Rambie 2006-10-07 ch 3, anon. | abuseYou have a pretty good idea for this fic. However, there are a few things that I'd like to point out. Firstly, putting all the japanese words in bold..well, to be blunt, it looks stupid. x_x Most people are already familiar with what these mean, so you should porbably just leave it, or not use japanese at all. Secondly, the grammar and overall flow of your writing needs work. Besides that, this is quite good, and I'm looking forward to the chapters to come. |
| The Group of One 2006-08-05 ch 6, | abusehm... more? I can't wait till the Naruto characters meet the Xmen. xD Interesting. um... one point. The Shinobi wouldn't be a pushover. They seem almost too weak in this (especialy considering how old they are and how powerful they are in the series at their anime timeline age). if that made any sense. yeah... update? I love this fic. |
| When Darkness Rises 2006-08-02 ch 4, | abuse_~_I have a question, do you guys want quantity or quality_~_ quality |
| Gundum M 2006-07-04 ch 6, | abuseit's all right |