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Kelly
2008-05-24
ch 17, anon.
abuseThis is a riveting story I couldn't stop reading, I know that its been a while since it was updated which probably means it won't be finished but I still have to say top job and a small part of me hopes I'm wrong and it will continue. Daniel giving them hell how cool is that!
Julie A. Richards
2008-05-23
ch 1, anon.
abuseVery, very good; keeps you reading and ... well... it's frustrating that it's ended on a relatively 'miner' cliffhanger... but it's still a good read.

SPOILER
Daniel is prisoner in Russia, and then he gets kidnapped, and then kidnapped again...

I really, really, really hope the author gets back to this, and finishes it, soon.
jajjaj
2008-03-27
ch 17, anon.
abuseHey,

Glad to see you're writing again. I see you say you are having a hard time with Whumped! I'd settle for you writing more on Uh-No! It's a wonderful story, and I've been sitting on the edge of my seat for way too long! Please update soon.
Frozen Waterz
2008-01-31
ch 17,
abuseOMG! Please update this fic quickly! It's really annoying having to stop at a point like this! Keep up the great work!
Renenet D.
2007-11-27
ch 17,
abuseI'm not sure if I've already sent feedback for "Uh-No!", but I really like all the twists and turns this story takes. Poor Daniel, from one hornets' nest to another, oy. And, although the focus is primarily on Daniel, I like how you pay attention to other characters, as well, Jack especially.
Thanks! I'm looking forward to more updates!
Lurkinshdws
2007-09-26
ch 17,
abuseWhat happens next? Jack better hurry his ** up! I feel bad for Robert and Danny too! Don't keep us waiting! Write another chapter soon please!
jaj
2007-09-24
ch 17, anon.
abuseWaiting patiently for an update...
forestwife
2007-08-13
ch 17,
abuseoh no! I was all - yay! - when Robert phoned Jack, but now he's been shot! does nothing EVER go right for Daniel?!
update soon!
Malicean
2007-08-05
ch 17,
abuseSo finally they found the right button to push. Good to know the cavalry is already on the move. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Khentkawes
2007-07-29
ch 17,
abuseI should have known that was too easy. Still, you can't blame a girl for being optimistic. Either way, I didn't quite see this twist coming. Though once again, it makes perfect sense, so I probably should have. Daniel just won't let someone else get hurt because of him. Even if he disliked the person, he would still try to save them, and after all Makepeace has tried to do for him, he probably feels guilty for putting Robert in this position anyway.
Kudos to Makepeace for doing the right thing. Although Jack now has two captives to rescue.
And seriously, what's up with his captors? What exactly do they plan on doing with the documents Daniel translates? It's not like they have access to the Stargate...or do they? Or are they expecting plans for some alien weapon? *sigh* somehow, I just never understand the motives of insane villains. I guess that's because they're insane, isn't it? *grin*
Anyway, I was so happy for an update that I just had to give you a long review to tell you how excited I was. I was sucked in at the beginning and couldn't stop reading. Nice and suspenseful.
Keep writing!
Zuzanny
2007-07-29
ch 17,
abuseYay an update! I want Daniel rescued!
Jasmine
2007-07-29
ch 17, anon.
abuseOh my goodness! I'm on the edge of my seat, and I can't wait for more! I'm surprised to see Daniel actually cooperating, since in this tale he's been so compltely, beautifully stubborn! But you're so right - Daniel would realize that Makepeace has betrayed the bad guys, and thus is very expendable - in fact, they're more likely to kill him than not. A hostage for Daniel's good behavior is all the value they'd see in Makepeace at this point, so Daniel needs to make them think that their strategy will work in order to keep robert alive. But I'm wondering how he'll keep from giving them any real information. Maybe this first document is militaristically useless, so he can go ahead and translate it correctly? It's very likely that they'd start out with documents that they've really already translated, so they can verify his willingness to do accurate work. I think Daniel would realize this, so I imagine he'd try to do correct work, at least on the first few pieces.

I hope he can hold out and keep Robert alive until Jack comes! So many times, he's been so close to rescue, and yet so far! Maybe today will be Daniel's day - and poor Jack, who must be seething with frustration after so long of not being able to bring his archeologist home! I'm eagerly awaiting the next update!
jaj
2007-07-28
ch 17, anon.
abuseYay, I was worried you weren't going to continue. Poor Daniel can't catch a break, can he?
Eve Jackson
2007-07-28
ch 17,
abuseDamn! Now they know Daniel's weakness! That man and his humanity always gets him into trouble!
Still great!
MORE MORE MORE
Eve
Nighshae
2007-07-28
ch 17,
abuseGood chapter, very, very good chapter... More?
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