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| Zuzanny 2008-07-13 ch 40, | abuseWow. Awesome fic. I'm glad it ended happily. :) |
| Zuzanny 2008-07-13 ch 14, | abuseAM REALLY ENJOYING THIS FIC SO FAR. :) |
| Vanafindiel 2008-05-23 ch 40, | abuseSo does the other reality Samantha get her Daniel and Jack back? |
| Wuchel1 2008-04-02 ch 40, | abuseAwesome story. Just plain awesome. |
| Candi 2008-03-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is the best SG1 fanfic I've ever read! Great work. |
| Key Shinigami 2008-02-28 ch 40, | abuseAwesome story! I really hope you get a the sequel out soon! Have fun writing it though, that's the point of writing it after all;) |
| Amakurikara 2008-02-19 ch 40, | abuseOh...my...gosh. This was the most fantastic story I have ever read! Wow. I don't think that there are really words to express how amazing this story was. But what about A001's reality's people? Will everything be alright in the end for them? What about their Daniel who is in stasis? Do you plan on making a sequel of sorts to answer these questions? It'd be awesome if you did. You are an amazing writer, and I hope that you make a sequel to this. I've read your other stories, and they are all amazing. ^_^ Keep up the good work! |
| teh blumchenkinder 2007-10-10 ch 40, | abuseOh, don't worry-- I'll review the other chapters, and probably this one again (not logged in, obviously). But I have several initial final reactions (...*blink*): 1) What a monster! (length of fic) Really, this is a novella! 2) ... This is some twisted shat. What more can I say? *shudder* 3) Whee! Wow! I like it! You even managed to have some funny-haha stuff in there! I laughed for about ten minutes, and still get the giggles when I think of Daniel (L538) and Jack (Gsomethin'erother) "kissing." 4) You really, really like this, don't you? That's exemplified by the care, certainly, and the level of detail-- almost all necessary, and all of it enhances the work. This is extraordinarily well thought-out. I've seen published, respected authors not do as well as this. You began with the individual psychology and extended it outwards, recreating the characters from the television show, and filled in a few crannies-- then you went to other realities, and did that there, and somehow managed to keep the interactions straight! Furthermore, you took care with the relationship of A001 O'Neill and Jackson, and managed to couch it fairly well-- because most of those who read this are *not* in that sort of relationship. (Or so I assume...) No wonder it took you so long! Well, I gotta scoot, so laters! teh |
| karen 2007-09-16 ch 40, anon. | abuseOh my, what an epic! Great story, although I don't know how you kept track of so many realities! I do hope you let us know what happened to Jack, Samantha and Daniel in reality A001 one of these days - I do love happy endings |
| GryphonWonder14 2007-08-12 ch 40, | abuseIt's... Beautiful! I followed this story from beginning to end and it is amazing! The characters are so well portrayed, the plot is incredibly original, and the story is entertaining to read. There is even some humor in it! I loved the characterization of all the alternate reality characters especially from the 'Daniel-napping' reality. I really want to know about the future of Samantha and the catatonic Jack. Plus, don't they have Daniel, their Daniel, frozen someplace? It would be great if you wrote a fic about it all. Great job, keep it up. |
| Atlantagate 2007-07-22 ch 15, | abuseThis is such a fantastic story! I didn't want to, but now I'm feeling sorry for the other Jack. Poor Daniel is getting attached to him too. Brilliant use of an evil Hammond. Unexpected and chilling to say the least. I am so loving this! |
| Atlantagate 2007-07-21 ch 4, | abuseEXCELLENT, EXCELLENT, EXCELLENT! I just found this story and I don't know how I missed it all this time. I love it! This Jack's behavior is so chilling along with the behavior of all the people at the SGC. I can't wait to see the final confrontation between our Jack and the alternate Jack. Wonderfully engaging story! |
| Tribal Matriach 2007-07-19 ch 40, | abuseWhat an absolutely superb story! It made me laugh in places, and cry in places, just the correct balance between people and their outlooks, and ... well... Congratulations! |
| carol2flute 2007-07-10 ch 40, anon. | abusei loved it! Oh, and did i mention that i loved it? i love your writing it. if you write any more i will read MORE! i must have MORE! |
| Rat 2007-07-10 ch 40, | abuseAwesome story, only sorry it had to end. |