 Elita One 2009-08-27 . chapter 18I know it has been a long time since you updated but will you be updating this at all.
your stories are fantastic! |
 411 2009-06-29 . chapter 1 Just thought I'd give you a warning; there is a writer here who has been plagiarizing stories. They used to go by Pillar of Winter but now use This Account Does Not Exist as a screenname. Look up "A Very Special Arthur" and compare it to this thiefs "A very special Stan" and "A very special Data". They are word for word identical.
Be on guard for this person and please, pass on this message. |
 battleofwits 2009-06-13 . chapter 18love this story and all your others!
im just wondering why you haven't updated in 2 years...i enjoyed this story and the last maruader so i do hope you update this story and the revised last maruader! |
 flutterby-flower 2008-06-20 . chapter 10I'm loving this story so far - yay for Sirius being back! and yay for you going about it in a totally unique, realistic fashion :)
Janus is an intersting character - i'm looking forward to finding out more about his and Remus' pasts, and why he's so intense (thats the only word I can think of to describe it).
Only one issue...Angelina graduated at the end of Harrys 5th year, so she couldn't be quidditch captain (canon captain is Harry, but if you wanted one of the girls, Katie Bell is still at Hogwarts in his 6th year).
And now I'm going to go and actuallyfinish the story...I'll probably be up all night :D
cheers,
flutterby |
 Tetsubinatu 2008-04-11 . chapter 4Hi! I have been reading through all your stories and enjoying them very much! Just a little note 'the die is cast' refers to throwing a die (singular of dice).
I suspect that as less and less english-speakers use the word 'die' this is going to become more obscure. My 8yo came home from school and told me that he is not going to use the word 'die' any more because his friends at school all use the word 'dice' for both singular and plural and he doesn't want to be the odd one out. I can't fault his reasoning. But it's definitely not 'dye' anyway!! |
 candylandkid11 2007-09-19 . chapter 18Great story! Update Soon please!! |
 csitsz 2007-09-11 . chapter 1 i enjoy reading this story very much! i can't wait for the next update |
 Fiery Goofer 2007-08-16 . chapter 18 This is spiffing, really great. I am looking forward to reading about what Lupin Sr. is going to say to Remus.
I look forward to the next installment. |
 csitsz 2007-08-06 . chapter 1 i love it! update, please |
 AuereusUna 2007-07-22 . chapter 18WOW, wow wow. I really love your Making History stories! I hope Janus will become more like end-of-HTT Janus. Of course most of all, I hope you finish the story! heehee
*Quick point: I noticed several times you would type something like "so-and-so nodded courtly" it is actually "curtly". Also you kept putting prize instead of "price". Other than that you are a good writer! |
 whiteoaks 2007-06-06 . chapter 18The interaction between characters is excellent. I especially like how the Lupin brothers care for each other while seemingly barely tolerating the other's existence. I'd like to have read Dumbledore's reaction to Snape's trying to choke Harry, provided Fairbank did tell him about it. Excellent story. |
 Miss RJ 2007-06-04 . chapter 1This is excellent, as usual.
Keep up the great work! I'm eagerly awaiting the next installment.
Cheers!
-Miss RJ |
 SiriusElvenStar 2007-06-04 . chapter 18Yay, Moony's back! Can't wait for the next installment!
Love Always,
~SiriusElvenStar~ |
 2007-05-09 . chapter 17 gREAT 6^-^So much better than HBP ! I love the fact that aharrys has done Necromancy in order to save Sirius (he is alive ^-^!). I also laugh my head off when I read that Harry LOCKED Hermione...In a BROOM CLOSET! Merlin, That was SO funny! And just to imagine how FURIOUS she must have been lol. I Like the Welsay and I'm glad that Harry speak with them. They feel like Harry is their son but for harry it's too awkward.they are his best friend's PARENTS.I m also glad that we could see Luna and Neville ^-^Love those two. But...Why Harry ISN T the Quidditch Captain ? I tyhough Angelina has already finish her 7th year ?
Snape attacked Hary with a choking spell ?...I knwe that Sirius would kill him but I also like this new teacher ^-^*laugh*and the fact that he arrested Snape. M Don't know why but evrytime I think of him, an image of a woman come to my mind. I can't remember...Did they HOLD DA in book 6 ? If they, did Malefoy coma ? I like your story because even though you try a new approch of this book with others character and all, you still follow some of JK plotline and you respect well 1) all the suspicion going 2)the rivalry between Harry and Draco(which is in the center of the book). I'm looking forward to1) Halloween (Old Voldie ALWAYS try something during this period and something ALWAYS happen...M if I recall correctly it''s also coincide with 1) Voldy's birthday( Joy !-_-')2) Harry 's conception(quite a disturbing image lol)
Well continue I love ^-^More of Sirius/Harry discussion about ...you know life before their meeting, why they needed each others etc...Bonding ^-^ |
 SiriusElvenStar 2007-04-30 . chapter 17What is Hermione up to? When is your next update? |