Interesting story! I would like to see where it leads.

One thing I would like to mention though, could you add translations for the Japanese you use? I stared at 'sumimasen' for a good three minutes before I remembered what it meant.

Please update soon!

Update soon!

omg, bad Renji!

Thanks for up-dating!

i really like were the story is going...i dont like how short it is! try to make them longer! & plz finsh ur story! XD other wise...ist great!
~Lizz

Oh, dear... I, er, wasn't expecting /that/ kind of a lemon, or that Renji could have such dark intentions...
I admit it was written well, but... scary. o.O

GAH! *byakuya fangirlism* Good job!! Renji is such a bastard, a side to him that you have pulled off with style, poor little Richiki. Keep writing, for god's sake!! We need more!!

Pervy-wervy Renji! Awh, I don't like Renji now! Byakuya was supposed to be MINE! Lol.

Yurmy... I can't wait for the hot man-sex to happen (I've never seen this pairing before, but I assume that's because I usually don't read BLEACH fanfiction), because I can't help but wonder who's going to be seme...

Oh, I liked the "Just a dream, nothing more" thingermajigger. It reminded me of the poem 'The Raven' by Poe.

And 'Never Did Run Smooth' is a cool title, but YOU NEED TO CAPITALIZE ALL THE LETTERS IN THE TITLE! Lol. I cannot tell you how many times I've not read a fic because the letters weren't capitalized.

Ever heard the song 'Mitternacht' by E Nomine? It's on youtube; go and find it.

>.< aww dammit!...lol you have wonderful skills, alot better than the "oh my God *squeals*" romances of the two in question, my sincere gratitude for such a story, please please keep it up (heh)and i hope the next chapter? comes in quickly. I'm patient, but getting scared now that school is rapidly eating away at my free time.

Really This story is good! Don't be so hard on yourself! The only bad thing is how short the chapters are! Please update soon!

Ohh! That's aweful! O.o I almost feel bad for Richiki... But... I can't! Byakuya! Get better! XD
^^ And I applaud you on your story! 6.6 I must say it's quite good... even if I do enjoy Byakuya being the more dominant person. I can work with this... O.o It's practically all I've seen so far... but it's amazing! Keep up the incredible work!

Like your story.
Update please i want to know what will happen.
Poor Richiki...

This story is really good! The only critism I can give it that your chapters are pretty short. In one of your notes you said that you write better in short amounts.. when I used to write sometimes I would just write a little at a time and combine them into larger pieces. Other than that I really love this story, update soon!

Ayano here.

Yay! An update! And what an ending...wow. Don't keep us waiting for the next chapter for as long as last time, although I know you and Ayame are exactly the same with writers block and procrastinating! What will I do with you two??

Anyway. Glad our advice was useful. I do love the ByaRen-ness of it all. God!! Poor little Richiki!

i liked it

i liked it