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Reviews For: The Ties that Bind

BookwormDragon
2008-01-23
ch 1,
abuseAn interesting tidbit, I'm always pleased to see 13th Warrior fic. But I'm afraid I missed the punchline. The story seems to end rather abruptly, without really tying into the title. Are you planning to write more?
The Noble Rot
2007-09-28
ch 1,
abuseThis is actually quite a good story. I like the fact that you've been respectful in your characterization of the Muslim Ahmed. You have no idea how sick we get when people misrepresent members of our religion. But you've done well. REALLY well. I can't believe you don't have more reviews, you really deserve them. I'm adding you to my favorites list.
Jessamyn Dreamer
2006-06-08
ch 1,
abuseWhere is he? *Scans once more* Where... Is... Weath?
WAH!
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