wtf? that is the most random, abrupt ending ever. i'm just staring at the screen like 'uhh.' bewildered, perhaps.
but it's a cute story, again, love your style, fun characters - i think it would have been great as something longer, if only to both develop the characters and throw in some hints about whistler/garen so the end doesn't seem so ridiculous. :)
i think i'm going to have to read more about this whistler fella.
-keza

uhh, creepy, whistler. it's interesting, because this story is so short, but it seems longer, somehow. and that's not just because of time lapses. i'm not sure why.
anyway. great narration style, it's very easy to read - even though you keep switching point of views without warning, which is hard to get away with. but it flows. it's very enjoyable.

oh dear. that's intense. and, there's little addict spot. that's cute.
everyone thinks tillie is dumb but she doesn't seem all that dim to me. which i suppose is the point. well, as long as she doesn't turn manipulative, i'll be happy.

again, i love the interaction. i could just sit and listen to (er, read) whistler and spot bickering all day. they're like a married couple. tillie is pretty amusing, she's like a foil to them, and clearly neither really know what to do about her - at least in the long term.

HA. the whistler/spot interaction? classic. and i loved the laudanum bit. actually, it's planting dangerous ideas of drug-addicted-spot into my head.. oh my.. hmm.

how do you do that? 2 paragraphs and i'm already helplessly in love with Whistler. the hell?
i don't know if it was the gaelic, the green hat, or him gaily trotting, but it's great. this chap is a great hook for the story, so.. onward!

Oh, wow... I really really like this story. But, ah, I always love stories with Whistler.

The story is great, I actually started tearing (ok, maybe I was a little sad before I read this). I am SO interested in this, very intereaging... please continue.

Very nice story. I like the way it's written... just the way you have each chapter set up. Also, I like how Spot is portrayed, and Tillie is just so sweet. I think it's an interesting story with a lot of emotion running through it. I couldn't help but read it twice.

Pretty wicked

Wow. THis is the most wonderful story I've ever seen you write. IT's stunning. AMazing. I honestly can't describe it. I love it.

YOU. You are a good writer, sir, no doubt about it!

“Alright, lemme get this straight,” Spot said, his face the epitome of bewilderment. “You found a girl, and brought her here.” Whistler nodded. “And she ain’t a whore, or a dancer at Medda’s.” Whistler nodded again. “You feelin’ alright?”

Okay that line is def my favorite thing I have read in a while, it made me laugh out loud for the first time all day! GREAT STORY so far!

Aw. Tillie's cute, I like her already. Even though she is pretty dumb. Heh.

It's nice that you really research things you put into writing, or that you just know them for some reason. It makes it more realistic and ultimately more enjoyable.

Can't wait for more.

"Your majesty" -- that alone made me enjoy the chapter. Poor Spot, I can just see his face looking at this girl. Nice job :)

Very cute. I love the accents in this, they're really good! Tillie is so sweet!

This story is really wuite a charming story, i like it.