The theme and character interaction in this story are great. I especially enjoyed the ending, an din particular, the openness of it. Well done.

Absolutely wonderful. Once again, the way you make Edward and Roy interact, their dialog and all, is just great. There are a lot of things I liked about this, but I can't exactly point them all out, or I'd be typing until tomorrow morning. I really enjoy your writing, and I'm off to read some more!