i like it

This story started out good, then got, for the lack of a better word, boring. Please don't be offended by what I am saying, I have only started writing & have only posted my first chapter so I'm not a great writer by any means. The thing that I did notice was that there was alot of spelling errors, if you have a beta..make sure they check spelling & grammer..I know it's hard to keep track when you are writing, but the beta is suppose to be checking.

Anyway like I said, I'm not judging your writing abilities so I hope I didn't offend you,.

Take care & have a great day.
:)

lol.. so cool... love your meshing of series's.

DragZ

this is a good story though the chapter separation is slightly unorthodox. Is the Sg-1 crossover going to be a major part in this story

Potter, Black, Dumbledore, Gentry, Emerys, Slytherin, Gryffindor, Hufflepuff, Ravenclaw, Tenraoe, Merlin, Le Fay, Pendragon, Caer Azkaban, Rothwood, Warrien, Sakrath, Brentworth, Evans, Kerriworth, Antonini, Donovan, Romanov, Gondor, Rohan, Moria, Imaldalris, Lothlorien, Mirkwood and Ithilien, Lupin, Pettigrew,and McGonagall.

seriously? wow dude im pretty sure thats not possible with out some type of incestual relationship. ok it probably is but still, thats a bit overkill there dontcha think?

For some unfathomable reason another picture immediately came to his mind.

Waist length dirty blond hair, wide doe like eyes and a wand stuck behind the ears. The image then focused on soft cherry colored lips and they opened up to reveal a set of pearly white teeth. “Wit beyond measure is a man’s greatest treasure”, said a soft voice.

-Hate to break it to ua buddy, but that doesn't happen. If your gonna do romance, do it right. And seriously, nothing ever goes so perfect. Not even for a genius.

LOL

Its a good thing its listed as a parody because considering this story to be even remotely serious is impossible.

It combines so many bad independent!harry cliches that it has to be a crackfic. I started reading it because of the HarryLuna ship, but gave up after a while, due to the whole premise being bogus. I enjoy powerful!Harry, if his powergain is believable and incremental, I enjoy independent!Harry if its done in moderation and without him being the sole heir to millions of influential ancient families of untold power and wealth.

I did not enjoy this story. at all.

I really tried to read this story. However, the homonym confusion/abuse is too much. Misused and misspelled words along with misspelled canon terms and names. "There" should not be used as a substitute for "they're" or "their". "'Loose does not have the same meaning as "lose". "Affect" and "effect" are not interchangable. "Two", "too" and "to" have vastly different meanings. You really need a beta reader.

very good so far D bashing is good and i like that you brought in stargate

Just wanted to let u know how much I've enjoyed reading this story and that I'm patiently waiting for more
Take care

Nicol

Oh my heart. It has been torn asunder... great start, cant wait to see where it goes.

I love how smart harry is. Im a little confused about how some things happened but that doesnt matter much, This story rockss

The ideas of the Founders rooms and everything else just rocks so good.

I just love this story, it so rocks.

This story combines all of the many different story ideas that I have seen in so many stories, but they are combined masterfully and i love it.