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Morgan
2008-03-24 . chapter 5
I like it. It's wierd and not the best (no offense) but I like it.
Alana84
2007-08-16 . chapter 5
Finnaly a new update and this chapter was really good, especially towards the end! Loved the kissing scene, it was very nice, so full of tension, me like, laughs!

Cannot wait to read more so please update soon...
SithLibrarian
2007-08-14 . chapter 1
Have you ever read Terry Pratchett's Discworld series? If yes, very funny, I get the joke. If no, then you might want to check the spelling on the preview.
CapriceAnn Hedican-Kocur
2006-10-07 . chapter 4
I kinda liked "Lost Time" as a title. . . .and I really hope that you update this again really soon! ! ! ! I cannot wait to see how Harry reacts to Sirius when he comes home! ! ! ! I'm sorry that I did not read this before now! ! ! ! I have had a busy summer and I finally got to this. . . .
Alana84
2006-08-07 . chapter 4
Great story, wow I'd never have guessed Hermione's secret! She killed her parents murderer, and yes she was very naivé! But she had every right to do that even if it was wrong, the poor girl!
Hope Sirius will make her feel better! Hermione has not got green eyes, she's got brown but maybe she is wearing contacts (in the your story), who knows?, lol! '
Plz update soon...

Lost Time sounds nice enough!
SiriusBlackFan2
2006-08-04 . chapter 4
How man! She shouldn't have to bare such a burden alone..Poor thing..Hopefully Sirius can help

Update soon

Oh yeah of course Lost time...
x-Teh-Skittles-Alchemist-x
2006-07-27 . chapter 4
Aw! T_T Poor Hermione!
Update soon!
indescribablyBee
2006-07-27 . chapter 4
good chapter. poor hermione! more soon please! for a title i like 'lost time' best.

Bee :)
GalwayGirl2989
2006-07-27 . chapter 4
Update again soon! Poor Hermione. Sirius will make her feel better again!! Cheers :o)
R J Lupin's Kat
2006-07-09 . chapter 1
Hm, this is interesting. I really like the description you give to Sirius' initial location.

My only suggestions are to watch your capitalization (Department of Mysteries) and your run-on sentences. Punctuation is your friend! I know; I'm bad about that a little too often. Go back over your work when you finish and ask yourself if you would have to take a breath when reading something aloud. Or perhaps you would interject a pause for clarification or simply emphasis. If so, you need some punctuation there.

Otherwise, really nice job. I'm interested enough to continue. (For me, that's saying something.)

- kat
idntlikeurpants
2006-06-29 . chapter 3
Wow! I love Three Day's Grace. ^_^ I like this story alot.

Also, I thought of a name for the story. How about "Missing Youth" or "Lost Youth"?
imakeeper
2006-06-27 . chapter 3
he's siriusly thick lol
imakeeper
2006-06-27 . chapter 2
ill keep an open mind... i HATE THE CANNONS!
imakeeper
2006-06-27 . chapter 1
interesting
SiriusBlackFan2
2006-06-27 . chapter 3
So Hermoine has an online boyfriend, interesting. She's gotta alot of things she's keeping quiet.

I vote for my own Lost Time.

Update soon.
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