 Morgan 2008-03-24 . chapter 5 I like it. It's wierd and not the best (no offense) but I like it. |
 Alana84 2007-08-16 . chapter 5Finnaly a new update and this chapter was really good, especially towards the end! Loved the kissing scene, it was very nice, so full of tension, me like, laughs!
Cannot wait to read more so please update soon... |
 SithLibrarian 2007-08-14 . chapter 1Have you ever read Terry Pratchett's Discworld series? If yes, very funny, I get the joke. If no, then you might want to check the spelling on the preview. |
 CapriceAnn Hedican-Kocur 2006-10-07 . chapter 4I kinda liked "Lost Time" as a title. . . .and I really hope that you update this again really soon! ! ! ! I cannot wait to see how Harry reacts to Sirius when he comes home! ! ! ! I'm sorry that I did not read this before now! ! ! ! I have had a busy summer and I finally got to this. . . . |
 Alana84 2006-08-07 . chapter 4Great story, wow I'd never have guessed Hermione's secret! She killed her parents murderer, and yes she was very naivé! But she had every right to do that even if it was wrong, the poor girl!
Hope Sirius will make her feel better! Hermione has not got green eyes, she's got brown but maybe she is wearing contacts (in the your story), who knows?, lol! '
Plz update soon...
Lost Time sounds nice enough! |
 SiriusBlackFan2 2006-08-04 . chapter 4How man! She shouldn't have to bare such a burden alone..Poor thing..Hopefully Sirius can help
Update soon
Oh yeah of course Lost time... |
 x-Teh-Skittles-Alchemist-x 2006-07-27 . chapter 4Aw! T_T Poor Hermione!
Update soon! |
 indescribablyBee 2006-07-27 . chapter 4good chapter. poor hermione! more soon please! for a title i like 'lost time' best.
Bee :) |
 GalwayGirl2989 2006-07-27 . chapter 4Update again soon! Poor Hermione. Sirius will make her feel better again!! Cheers :o) |
 R J Lupin's Kat 2006-07-09 . chapter 1Hm, this is interesting. I really like the description you give to Sirius' initial location.
My only suggestions are to watch your capitalization (Department of Mysteries) and your run-on sentences. Punctuation is your friend! I know; I'm bad about that a little too often. Go back over your work when you finish and ask yourself if you would have to take a breath when reading something aloud. Or perhaps you would interject a pause for clarification or simply emphasis. If so, you need some punctuation there.
Otherwise, really nice job. I'm interested enough to continue. (For me, that's saying something.)
- kat |
 idntlikeurpants 2006-06-29 . chapter 3Wow! I love Three Day's Grace. ^_^ I like this story alot.
Also, I thought of a name for the story. How about "Missing Youth" or "Lost Youth"? |
 imakeeper 2006-06-27 . chapter 3he's siriusly thick lol |
 imakeeper 2006-06-27 . chapter 2ill keep an open mind... i HATE THE CANNONS! |
 imakeeper 2006-06-27 . chapter 1interesting |
 SiriusBlackFan2 2006-06-27 . chapter 3So Hermoine has an online boyfriend, interesting. She's gotta alot of things she's keeping quiet.
I vote for my own Lost Time.
Update soon. |