great story.

great story.

This is a really great story, both of them are.. I hope you plan on writing a follow-up to this sometime soon,.

Hey Great Story! But what is the New Title and Where can I find it and Has it come out yet. Also I WANT TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! NO I NEED TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!

keep it up.. u've done good so far

Very nice, I'd say about as good as the first, but it it's lacking one important element... It needs to be continued. I beg of thee to do so as soon as possible. Thank you! -Mae

Hurry up and write more!

Hi!

Very good story so far, you can write very well! Please write Part 2 soon!

Cathy

Tis one seems as good as the first one! Keep it up!

Well this is a really good chapter. I hope you'll get the next chapter out soon. Keep up the good job.

Pretty good. I liked the other part of this better though (I forget what it's called). I don't know why. But keep writing.

I love your story so far...very well written ang good character interaction. Please keep up the good work!