I love it!

Hi there!

Oh I like this chapter! Ooh please, please get the next chapter up! This is really good though it was kinda long, but it was good.

Get the next chappie up!

Hehehehe you should be saying that about me and In The Rain...

Talk to ya later!

WOW! Mizu-chan, I can't believe how good your poems are. I really love them! ^_^

your friend,

Kirara

Mizu-chan! That was a wonderful story/poem! But how mean to leave us all hanging on the news that they received that was good and bad. But thats ok I will wait for the next one to read what it was.

I loved the idea of the freeze tag thing, god I haven't played that in a long while. Then to have all the servants of the castle join in the fun was really good. I liked the part where Sesshoumaru wanted to join the game but thought work was more important. Memories like games played with children are worth more than anything in this life. They grow up and move away but the work is still there.

He should have joined in the fun.

I'm sorry for not reviewing before but I have been following your poems. Its wonderful and I love it very much. Keep up the great work and I can't wait to read the next chapter. You rock!

Cindy

Hey Mizu-chan!

WOWOWOWOW how swet, loved it. But may I say, man that was one long poem! It felt almost like a story!

But I must say me likey very very much. Keep it up mizu-chan!

You're doing great.

PS. I love the part where they were playing! It was so sweet!

Haha, that was great Mizu-Chan! Haha! Geez, I haven't played Freeze Tag in like ages. Haha, that brought back some memories. Well nice to have you back. LoL! Later!

Soul-Chan

Nice poem, Mizu-chan!

Very inspiring!

Please continue with your story and I hope you did well in your competition. And wow it looks like you get reviews from My-Soul-Your-Puppet too! I like her reviews too.

This was a very beautiful poem, Mizu-chan. I can feel the feelings you have poured into the words.

You are amazing.

I aplogize for the late reply.

Hey it was so cute, but for somereson it was sad aswell? WELL I LOVE IT ethier way... and i do agree you are very good when it comes to writing poems!

My god! Thank you Mizu-Chan! That was so great! -sob- You dedicated this to me? WoW! That is a first! Well thank you so much! I loved it! It was so freakin'great! :) I am glad I can help you with something. Well great work, so keep it up kk? Later! Oh and good luck with your skating!
oxoxoxo
soul-chan

Definition of LOVE! LoL! AWESOME WORK! This is so freakin' great! I swear you can whip up a good poem! LoL! Well update soon, kk? I am happy to read and you have made me even hapier by putting me on your favs list! You are on mine too! :) I do hope you enjoyed Tell Me. Have you? Well great job and thank you for all you support and kind words! You really are a Goddess! Well later my friend!
oxoxoxxo
soul-chan

Wanna know something? Your poems are like the definition of love. Seriously. Sorry I ahven't updated. Lock down is harsh, I sit all day by my computer hoping, no more like praying, it'll come back on! lol! I wanna get back on so bad! Right now I am on for I had to beg to get on, which crushed my pride! But I am happy that you updated, so later!
oxoxoxox
soul-chan

OMFreakin'G! That was sad! GREAT JOB! Later!
oxoxox
soul-chan

Mizu-chan!

Oh My Gosh! What a beautiful poem! This one has to be the best of the lot!

Wow wow wow wow wow wow you totally blow me away with your poems!

Advi the Great? ... ... ... blush-blush-blush... Advi-chan has official turned magenta due to too much blushing!

Mizu-chan, good luck with your competition this coming weekend. I’ll be rooting for you!

Mizu-chan GO! GO!

YOU CAN DO IT! MIZU-CHAN!

KEEP GOING MIZU-CHAN!

This poem was very magical... not in a fairytale sort of way but magical in a more romantic and heavenly way.

Dear Mizu-chan,

Getting reviews doesn't really matter, because not everyone gives a review. You can see the hits you get for this chapter right? Every hit is for a person who has read it and those are your readers. You are a very gifted person and a remarkable poet. And one day you will be the best out there. Be strong my friend, and don't let a little thing like this get you down. I miss the way we used to talk very much but just think when you get back we will be able to send each other loads of long-long emails.

Cindygirl told me that she sent you a review and that you replied.

That's a good girl, now be strong and I'll try to find away so we can keep in touch.

Bye

Advi-chan : )

did you know pres buush wants to ban anime the website to sign petition is on my profile

Hi there Mizu-chan! I just found your poem and I have to say that you have me hooked. That is one of the best poems that I have ever read.

It holds so much emotion in it that it even makes me feel what you are saying. You are truely gifted and I'm glad that you shared your work with the rest of us so we can read them.

I know that you have not received very many reviews for this but it doesn't mean that your work is bad. On the contrary its very good and I loved it.

I'm Advi's friend too and she is a wonderful person. Please continue with your poem. You have done a great job so far and I loved the way its going.

Cindygirl