nice

OMG! I love it. You ahve to write more.

Oh I really liked it! Are you going to continue or is this a no go?

I hope you do continue though. That is if you're not to busy.

PERFECTOOO! please write the next chap, im biting my nails with anticipation from the wonder of what dylans reply will bee... :)

plz keep wrting

its really good so u should update soon!

It's good so far... Now put more up, before I find you and kick your butt for keeping your readers waiting for so long!

Please may we have some more lovely WillDylan? Oh, and it's not incest cos they're not blood related.

Please continue this, I want to see Dylan's reaction.

loved the story. please continue it, i think you've really got something good here. i love the way dylan came to will when he was upset and how will looks so vulnerable.

Bwah, you can't just leave us hanging there! Update, I beg of you!

GRR! I WANT MORE! There's not enough of this to go around... haha! The whole "I love you" thing was a bit sudden, but I'll roll with it. Especially if it means more DylanWill later... heheh... Also, in the beginning, you might want to take the "that his mother had made for him" out of the first paragraph. It's a bit too long, and it doesn't flow. But I luffle this pairing to death, and the rest of your writing was wondiferously amazing.

TheInkSlayer

i like it. i hope you finish.

Cool update soon!

next chapter please, you already got into the angst in chapter one, good job! jk jk, i'm kidding! i loved it. can't wait for the next one.