Reviews for The Consequences of Reading Harry Potter

Reviews For: The Consequences of Reading Harry Potter

Plethora Chaos 2007-11-21 ch 13,	abuseGreat! It flows. And I've got friends like this. Lol.
xoxstorii-gurrlxox 2006-09-25 ch 11,	abuseHeyy Sam. Hurry up with the next chapters. Like seriously. You have to get with the program!
xoxstorii-gurrlxox 2006-06-10 ch 8,	abuseHey "Mom" ^_~ LOL...love it..thats totally messed! Sam..I hope in real life..you wont go for those really old guys...especially someone like Snape..hehe remeber?? Romeo and Juliet?? Its wierd..how can he go from poetic to totally bizarre?
Cpt-J-Ss-bonnielass 2006-05-30 ch 2,	abuseok, het guys this is me. thnks so much for reading my story, u can also read my other story 'The journey's of Serena Riddle' and I also have a poem out called 'If you were there to see me cry'.Max Radio, yah mayb it was childish and yah harry and sanpe were OOC but havnt you ever thought, if they were then mayb there were supposed...DUH! My friend and I wouldnt have put them like that in our story, if it wasnt supposed to be like tht. So next, think a little before you critisize. Anyway, thanks to all the people who didnt critisize me, i luv the critisism, but not tht harshly the way Max radio. again, thnks for reading my story, i hope you read my other story and other poem. talk to you another time. (o yes about the french, my friend and i watched harry potter in french, and my friend said oui really realy hye and loud. So now we do it all the time.) luv yah all, moon-goddess5 muah to my fanfiction daughter(lol) little-moon-goddess5
Cpt-J-Ss-bonnielass 2006-05-29 ch 7,	abusehaha awsome story bye
??... dundun dun! just kidd... 2006-05-29 ch 1, anon.	abusehi, i lovwe this story it is so awesome, i love it so much.
mindreader208 2006-05-28 ch 7,	abuseLOL. This fic is funny! Can't wait for more. PLEASE UPDATE SOON! ~*~dreamcaster5
xoxstorii-gurrlxox 2006-05-26 ch 2,	abuseYOUR STORY SUCKED! lol just kidding...it was soo funny...see its funny to me..cuz i actually kno the way you guys actually. And Max Radio don't critize..specially tht harshly..if yu knew them it would have been more funny...and for the paragraphs it wasnt there fault!! So lay off!
Max Radio 2006-05-23 ch 1,	abuseOkay, the French is weird, but it was funny. This is a little childish I guess, but we all like to be children...Oh. You're fifteen. Well, uh...heh. I already said what I needed to say in my reiew for chapter two.
Max Radio 2006-05-23 ch 2,	abuse... Okay, I think that this was meant to be a spoof, right? Yeah... Alright, I laughed. I normally don't read this kind of thing, but it was funny. Harry was OOC, Snape was OOC (if he suspected them of being spies, he's the kind of guy who would probably NOT take them straight to Dumbledore). This is hard to read. There is like, no paragraphs...My eyes kept on skipping lines. The chapters are short. Grammar is bad. (It did add to the humor a little bit, though). That's all I can think of right now! Repair this and it'll be pretty funny. (A low score because of all the OOC-ness, and all the grammar mistakes too). 4/10

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