...WOW...i-i never thought writing could take MY breath away, i mean ive spent two-thirds of my life reading.
anyway that was awesome. please keep it up.

sincerely Infinite Oblivion.

Sorry I haven't reviewed yet, I got pretty sucked into the story and forgot to stop and review.

I really like how this is going so far. I'm estatic that Axel (and Demyx, thought we haen't seen him yet) isn't dead and that he is being included in the story.

The whole "Kairi not liking being treated like a princess" bit is really good. I wouldn't like that, either. And its accurate with how she feels at the end of the second game when she gets her own keyblade. Kudos.

I was sort of hoping Riku would get some more screen time. I'm all for the Sora/Kairi you've got going on, but personally I feel like you're just laving poor ol' angsty Riku out to dry.

I can't wait to learn more about this new enemy and how they came to be.

I feel like if Axel and Xaldin have retained all of their memories from being a Nobody, Sora would have a greater connection to Roxas. Shouldn't he have all of Roxas' memories, as well? Like, it seems like that when he is talking to Axel, he should be talking like he IS Roxas, rather than talking about Roxas like he isn't, you know, right there. Then again, Sora is a special case...

The whole Tinkerbell bit was great. I had the song from Peter Pan stuck in my head while reading it XD

I'm so glad the Dinsey characters are being included in this. I went to Disney World for my birthday, and I had to get my picture taken with Donald and Goofy because I'm such a KH nerd XD

Whew! It took me a little over a week but I finally finished this wonderful epic novel you've got here. I've never fallen in love with an oc before like this. Her catchphrase and quirks were adorable...not to mention her relationship/competition with MR. Riku. ;P I adored the Disney qoutes you added in and died laughing at the Lord of the Rings moment you slipped in there. (Heaven:'In place of a dark Lord you shall have a Queen!...) The Sora/Kairi was so cute. I think the Mulan verse was my favorite section. That, and when Kairi pwned Sora with a kiss in the mock battles. :D Great characterizations and plot. Can't wait to read the next one. *faves*

wow really good i honestly can't think of anything else to say so i'm not gonna put anything else

normally i'd only review at the end but this is bugging me why'd you put circular blade instead of chakram i know it doesn't really matter but it was bugging me really bad

M'am, I congratulate you on your victory. I admit, I'm a little behind the curb, but this story... well, if the Japanese ever found themselves roaming and found this story, they'd be hard pressed to NOT add a good chunk of this into KH3. You've succeeded where many have not, and I felt truly immersed in the story you've given us. and to think, a year and a half? 47 quality chapters? It's an amazing accomplishment, but I'm glad that it was done. I enjoyed every chapter. You asked for favourites, and I must admit mine was the Twilight Town episode, what with the lost memories and the matchmaking and Struggle tournament. I loved it. Awesome work. One final note before I end this. I try to write when i can, and I enjoy reading dialogue, because it is my biggest weakpoint. So, I just have to say that i could hear everyone's voice so clearly in this story, I have to congratulate you on that. the dialogue was beautiful. So, now that I've spoken my share, I want to thank you again for your dedication and commitment to this amazing story. Bravo, Ms. Talitha Koum, Bravo.
Keep up the extraordinary work.

Signed,
- The Unknown Warrior

nice!

I've read this story twice already, and I have not bothered to review. Apologies.

Well, to be honest, I was not in the fanfiction business when I started reading your story, but now I am. And here's your review.

I love this story. Nevaeh was a great character. I definitely would not mind if this turned out to be a game. And reading the parts with Riku and Nevaeh were greatly entertaining. Very nicely done.

I'm most likely going to read this again.

Wow. Just...wow. I LOVE this! This is some seriously good stuff, y'know? Like, one of my favorites now. No.1. Wow...

Ok, well, first of all this story was AMAZING! One of the best Kingdom Hearts sequels out there. I love the character of Neveah. She's the best OC I've ever "met." Everything in this story was so good. All of the characters were captured perfectly-especially Axel. Big smile for giving Riku someone to love, because too often he's left out or falls in love with Sora-Eww. So, I was reading this story I realized I needed to make notes so I could tell you about all my favorite parts.
-"BWAHAHAHAH-Axel kisses Larxene!" That was just too funny.
-"Aww...poor Cogsworth :( Axel steals his hat :("
-"You aren't gonna committ suicide without me, Mr. Riku." Ah, gotta love Neveah.
-"I'm not speaking to you Mr. Riku." Once again go Neveah. She gets all the best lines.
-"Kairi crying over Riku-so sweet!" To be honest, originally Riku/Kairi was my favorite pairings, until I met Neveah, so this moment was really touching.
-"HA! Mushu mixed up the movies! LOL" I found this funny. You make me laugh.
-"Sora and Kairi?-Lion King?" So cute. "I can't marry her, she's my friend." Sora and Kairi would make cute lions.
-Somewhere in the chapter intro you mentioned Mr. Darcy, which I found super cool because I refer to my future husband as Mr. Darcy. Great minds think alike.
-"'Since when have we been unstable?'-HA! Just say it Riku!" This was so funny. Riku trying to explain dating to Neveah. One of my all-time favorite scenes.
-"Yes sir I see you too! HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!" SO funny, once again. Why do we have so many different ways of saying "dating"?
-"Poor Riku-he has to fight Kairi! :(" Sadness. Riku's my favorite character and he has so fight Kairi. Of course, being the gentleman he doesn't. LOL I just called Riku a gentleman. He hates me now.
-"Oh, my gosh! Cloud won't fill out paperwork. I laughed at this so hard!" My roommate gave me this funny look because I burst out laughing at the tiny scene between Tifa and Cloud. I could SO see that happening.
-"Sora and Riku spit out drinks-made me smile"
-"Aww...sweet Larxene :)" She wants to die first. Oh, I need a tissue!
-"Hehe, 'You can try.' Reminded me of Batman" I could so see Riku as batman. He's got the right personality. Animated batman, though because that's the best one.
-"LOL Heaven" Yeah I would be really shocked if Demyx and Larxene thought their prison cell was like Heaven.
-"Tony-NO!" Alas, my favorite villan, with the most awesome keyblade is gone! Oh, how shall I survive.
-“What about the ones that want to live? You can’t just deny someone the right to life because you know its is hard-“ Hmm...this was interesting, kinda reminded me of real life.
-“As much as I adore you, I’d rather bebreathing...” Neveah does it again. I love her.
-"Aww, Kairi shared..." So sweet.
-"NO! Neveah, don't cut Riku's hair." First Tony now Riku's hair! How SHALL I LIVE!

So, that was just a little bit of what I was thinking during this story. I am curious as to what happened to Xaldin. I assume he died. I would almost feel sorry for him if he hadn't been such a tough boss to beat. I loved all the chacters you put in, especially Axel, my second favorite character. He's cool, or hot I suppose. I loved your little stories about Riku and Neveah. The valentine and chocolote ones particularly tickled my fancy.

So, too conclude. LOVED your story. Can't wait to read The After, it sounds awesome. If I were Square Enix I would hire you, but I am not so I will content myself with dreaming that I am. I'm gonna miss reading this. I suppose I could always read it again...
God Bless,
~Kyia

Great ending. Seriously this story was great, and your writing style takes two complete opposite contrasts in my mind. You can write very fuffly, entertaining, humorous, almost childlike romance. That is really sweet, and just adorable. Yet then you can go on to write this crazy bloody battles of people fighting to their last breath. Not many authors can do both and when they do, it usually doesn't work out. However in this fic you showed that well.

Gotta say its hard to just review an entire story, so really just gotta say it was great. I really enjoyed reading it, and just by reading it i could tell how much you loved to write it. Another good trait an author should keep, writing for the fun of it. No better reason right?

Thats really all i got to say, sometimes you really had me on edge, sometimes i couldn't help but smile, and other times i just found your writing to be so sweet. Just a great job and even if you finished this story a while ago, i figured you would still want a review.

-Frey

Now, I'll have you know that I was planning to submit a review when I was finished reading the whole story...but chapter 36...it deserves a review.
*ahem*

1. This whole story is amazingly suberb, by far in the best fanfiction I have EVER read from ANY category. Amazing and superb. There is a GOOD reason why you have 1600 reviews.
2. Chapter 36 was amazing. Xehanort's Heartless' characterization was amazing, the emotions were raw and powerful. I imagined the whole scene from chapter 35 and 36 in my mind like a movie, so magnificient written was it.
3. When Xeh's Heartless said "Get out of my host!" or whatnot, my first thought was "Amazing!" my second was "Tony, you are so screwed"
When Sora appeared near the end of 36, my first thoughts were, "Tony, you are so screwed again"
4. I'm an avid Ted Dekker reader, so I know EVERYTHING you are saying in relation to him...frankly...I wouldn't go so far as to say you are as good as Ted...but you ARE right up there near him.
4. You are a superb writer, as I'm sure you have been told already, but you cannot be told enough how good you are. This is seriously amazing stuff here.
5. I can see your love for Jesus through all your work and through your words. I'm honored to be a part of the the Bride of Jesus with you.

Now to go on to chapter 36, and hopefully Sora beating the heck out of Tony...

Cheers, you suberb authoress you!
~Mars

“Good. You’re alive. Now I can kill you-“

Seriously, this is now my favorite quote EVER. It's even better than "Me? Hug You?" I love Heaven! She's giving Riku a run for his money!

Catz

Okay I know you have about a million reviews for this fic but I have to say that reading it I was completely enraptured and loved it completely through and through. You did simply amazing on all of the plot details as well as all the moments of fluff. The other thing I couldn't help but notice was how much fun you seemed to have writing this. You wrote not only for your readers, but for yourself as well. I love that! Seriously this is what writing is all about. When you can imagine something and put it into words that not only you enjoy but others can too. It's simply amazing how well you did on this entire fic. I wish that I could have been there from the beginning to read it as you wrote it. I definately will be reading the sequel as you write it. I can't wait to see all the things you have planned. Keep writing always.

FFG- Jo

Hi, just here to say that i enjoyed the story. You have good interactions between the characters. Nevaeh is an interesting OC and one of the most developed ones I have seen. Thanks for the good story.