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How sad...I half expected a bit of semi-not so sad ending(meaning happy, but that seems to strong a word after reading it)...Very well written, I really admire how you captured their emotions and reactions to such an event

I really liked this. You're right- the emotional leap Hisoka made in the episodes was strange. I liked the concept and the emotion you put into your writing.

Sniffle. Sob. Fabulous. The way you wove the effects of the King of Swoirds arc into this was seamless, and I am also grateful that you address the recovery time for poor Hisoka. I know the manga and the anime cannot cover everything (darn it!), but this is the perfect use of fanfic, and you have done it extrememly well. I now hope that you have at least one happy fic, cos I am now going to be reading the rest of your backlist for today...lucky its the weekend!

I like that you're filling in some of the gaps in Yami. Lord knows there's enough of them. But that's just more fodder for fanfic writers. Good dialogue and idea, I hope that you continue to write for Yami.

well. just to let you know, now I'm crying. i loved this fic. but it made me cry.

not bad, not bad at all! a very good way to close the gap between disc 3 and 4 of the anime, and possibly could happen between volume 3 and 4 of the manga... *thinks* actually, it fits perfectly _ 'cuz tsuzuki was blaming himself in the manga and hisoka was still feeling incredibly guilty and all that jazz... so you did a really nice job _

Rin

Gorgeous display of emotion and captured so well in the text. I'm very very impressed with this piece. Although, I love all your pieces equally, I might turn out to favor this one most for a little while

nice a nice continuation of that arc. i have my own continuation too wonder who doesnt.. :P anyway, good job!

Wow, that was a really well written story! I loved it, and it closed the gap perfectly. i absolutly loved it!