Great story! Can't wait to read more. :)

I loved your "Getting Too Close" story! When are you going to finish it?

I like Bryan. I hope he doesnt hurt Lindsay.

I can't wait to find out what happens. Keep going!

I just found and read your whole story. Love it. Update soon.

Saderia

Holy crap...you're back! I had to reread some of this to refresh my memory. It's a Christmas miracle. I'm glad you are continuing with this story. The whole take down scene, perfect. I'm glad Lindsay is going to try and talk Bryan out of doing something stupid, I hope he listens. Please don't make us wait too long before you update again. :) Thank you.

That was such a strange feeling!
I read about the first 5 chapters of your story quite a few months ago and haven't read it since, and I'd forgotten this and thought I'd seen it in an episode!

I think that shows just how good you're writing is!
Please update soon, cannot wait!

that is a really good question
update soon please
ill will be waiting here patiently until you do

I'm so glad you've updated! I've read this before and can't believe I haven't commented before now. This is a very good story. I like your writing style. I also like how, since you can't always update like people want, this is written in such a way that sucks you write back in! I had to go back and read a bit of ch 7 to jog my memory, but once I did, it was like I'd just read the entire story and I got sucked right into this chapter and what was happening again, just like in an actual episode! Keep up the good work, and I look forward to reading your next update when you get a chance to do it.

i loved this... I cant wait to read more... I hope nothing happens to Lindsay...

JENNIFER

cant wait :)

A miracle indeed! :p I just reread this baby a few days ago and look what we have here - a spanking new chapter!

You've done wonderfully in the past and you did one heck of a job in this one too. great work!

No you cant just stop there !

Have her save that kid!

And holy crap, an update! How about one more chapter for this and Skeletons? Both are amazing.

Is this the end or are you just not updating anymore because this is a really good story and i want to see what happens next like who gets shot please tell me what's happening!