ASDFGHJKL. I'M LITERALLY CRYING RIGHT NOW. TT

IT'S SO BEAUTIFUL AND PAINFUL AND ALDKJALD.

FULL OF EMOTIONS. WONDERFUL. FANTASTIC. BEAUTIFUL. AMAZING. LOVELY. GREAT. MAGNIFICENT.

I LOVE YOU.

YOU HAVE A WONDERFUL TALENT.

luvluvlvuvluvlvuvluvluvluvluv it!

well, for one. am not mad for the tragic death of Natsume. you rather consoled us at the last part where Mikan stated indirectly though- that she's going to follow Natsume soon- and that was when she die, right? well, doesn't really matter as long as they were stuck together! hahaha)))(oooh did you think it just rhymed?XD) i'm a NxM diehard fan anyway:)) i know that the death is necessary because it's an angsty genre so i understand:)) though i'm disappointed at myself for being less imaginative while reading this story! . : i didn't cry- even though how much i want to feel the story so that somehow, i could feel that i'm the one in Mikan's position so then i'll cry *sighs* am craaazy . ehehe*sweatdrops* sorry for the display of some odd behaviors *nervous laugh* oh well, seeya in your next story!

ANOTHER BEAUTIFUL STORY! WONDERFUL JOB!

My eyes are still wet...

Anyway, KEEP UP THE AMAZING WORK!

i'mm crying like a baby... it seems that so far, i've read more things about alice gakuen that have made me cry more than any other anime

I WANT TO CRY! IT'S SO BEAUTIFUL! I WANT TO CRY FROM THE BEAUTIFUL, HORRIBLE SADNESS THAT MIKAN IS CONSUMED WITH. I want to comfort her, tell her that he's always there. That he was her fallen guardian angel when he was alive, and that now he's her guardian angel again. Even Death cannot part Natsume from you, Mikan. Sorry, I am crying now. It's just so beautiful, her love for him. I can feel her pain, calling out through this story. You did a wonderful job, Wrath of Athena-san. Beautiful. Amazing. No technical mistakes, by the way. It was perfect. Wonderful job. So sad, so lonely, but beautiful in it's sad loneliness. Thank you so much for this.

This is so cute! I really loved your fan-fiction! It grasps the readers attention.

That was so beautiful I almost cried. I didn't like Natsume dying of course but it was really well written. You could really feel Mikan's emotions. Good job.

Araleen

uh, I feel like I was reading a long tragic poem of love _ thanks for trying

This was amazing! I loved the fact it had a tragic ending! Yet, in the end, Mikan came out all the stronger and decided to move on with her life. Yes, it was very well written :)

it was really nice although i haven't stopped crying yet..

very descriptive and evocative. nice.

what a cute and sad story... like the ending ...

You made me cry...,(sobs) I love it!

I LIKE IT!