Great job! I really liked how you got into Avery's shoes! :)

hay, what about miller redfield he is AWSOME!!

This is very well written and captures the essence of the show, in that your most serious moments are also the most humorous. Good job. My only problem is that you seem to be overusing exclamation points. You should be more confident in your writing. Trust the humor to get its own point across.
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That was really sweet. :-)

that's a very good story!! i hope to see more from you soon.

VERY sweet! I just Finshed watching the Final today. I always though Murphy should have been with Frank Or Eldon/

It´s really well written, I loved it!

Good job, Kristen! It kept my interest, and I loved how it was from Avery's point of view! :)