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| cityfan 2007-09-10 ch 1, | abusewonderful.I loved the illusion/dream concept.Truely amazing.Thankyou. |
| heather1021 2007-01-26 ch 1, | abusethat was beautiful. |
| saturn567 2006-06-21 ch 1, | abusebeautiful! |
| MyLan Graz 2006-05-28 ch 1, | abuseAh. Beautiful!! I loved this, especially when she thought she was dreaming... but was not. Great job!! :) |
| erica1531 2006-05-26 ch 1, | abuseFantastic job. Beautiful writing, and I love what you did with Michelle's character, especially in the first half. |
| ToothFairy 2006-05-25 ch 1, | abuseTruly beautiful writing. Definately one of my all-time favorites! I was pleasantly surprised to find out that you'd written 24 stories before, so I set out to read them, and I really loved those too. I would definately welcome more!! :) |
| chezlovesyou 2006-05-23 ch 1, | abusewow! very surreal and moving-- very nice work! |
| Rachel 2006-05-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh, loved it! I was getting so depressed and teary-eyed, and then he came back! Beautiful! Weaving in the little bits of their life together (garden, painted door) was great. Wonderful story... thank you. |