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Reviews For: Illusion

cityfan
2007-09-10
ch 1,
abusewonderful.I loved the illusion/dream concept.Truely amazing.Thankyou.
heather1021
2007-01-26
ch 1,
abusethat was beautiful.
saturn567
2006-06-21
ch 1,
abusebeautiful!
MyLan Graz
2006-05-28
ch 1,
abuseAh. Beautiful!! I loved this, especially when she thought she was dreaming... but was not. Great job!! :)
erica1531
2006-05-26
ch 1,
abuseFantastic job. Beautiful writing, and I love what you did with Michelle's character, especially in the first half.
ToothFairy
2006-05-25
ch 1,
abuseTruly beautiful writing. Definately one of my all-time favorites! I was pleasantly surprised to find out that you'd written 24 stories before, so I set out to read them, and I really loved those too. I would definately welcome more!! :)
chezlovesyou
2006-05-23
ch 1,
abusewow! very surreal and moving-- very nice work!
Rachel
2006-05-23
ch 1, anon.
abuseOh, loved it! I was getting so depressed and teary-eyed, and then he came back! Beautiful! Weaving in the little bits of their life together (garden, painted door) was great. Wonderful story... thank you.
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