|Reviews for Black Eyes|
| Light on the Horizon 1/9/13 . chapter 10
Wonderful story! I really enjoyed it :-)
| trollalalala 10/18/12 . chapter 10
Wonderful! i was hooked since reading the first chapter. good job!
| trollalalala 10/18/12 . chapter 1
You really set up the stage well! I am interested in reading more.
Excellent summary, by the way.
| Ruya Firtina 9/6/12 . chapter 10
Sigh...you are just so good at writing. I'm rereading your works again-they really transport you to the lands of Gondor and Rohan. It's marvelous. The amount of research you put into these works is astounding. There's just so much detail-though none of it unnecessary. It's detailed without the detail clogging up the story. Beautiful.
| iwishiwasjane 5/30/12 . chapter 10
the pink dress was hilarious, and i love this lothiriel- shes really clever, organising the food and stuff :)
| Turwaithien 5/23/12 . chapter 10
Such a lovely story...as all of yours are!
Here Lothíriel is quite a resourceful young princess.
It was a mental treat in itself to picture this pink monstrosity of a dress...;-)
It's lovely to read how Éomer even charmed dragon Ivriniel. LOL
No need to say that I'm glad of course that Lothíriel changed her mind in the end.
I never tire of your stories because they are refreshing, divers and addictive.
GREAT job as always! THANK YOU!
| Ruya Firtina 5/10/12 . chapter 2
Oh my freaking god. This is wonderful. You are wonderful. Aunt Ivriniel is wonderful. Seriously, I love all of the battle-language. Gah.
| ethuil 4/25/12 . chapter 10
I loved this story! It was so funny (especially in the beginning) and very well-written! A very enjoyable read!
| Talia119 3/31/12 . chapter 10
I had forgotten how much I liked this story! I just read it again and it is really wonderful. I love your humor. Pink dress and green veil! I shudder!
| shine lots 3/11/12 . chapter 8
I know how Lothiriel feels when she says: "In her opinion his tendency to regard the personal affairs of his family as an ongoing source of amusement was one of his less endearing qualities." Wow, you make me identify with your characters, and you really do capture realistic feelings! True talent! Love it!
| shine lots 3/11/12 . chapter 7
I really like how interested you keep us. After all, this quoted idea ("Next her father would appeal to Éomer's chivalry, the latter would offer to restore her honour by making her his wife and everybody would be satisfied") should be old news to us, as I have expected this to be Imrahil's line of attack since chapter three, yet you still intrigue me with the idea. That's talent!
Oh, and I love Lothiriel's rejoinder.
"I suppose the proper thing for me to have done was to drown," she muttered rebelliously. hahaha. Lol!
| shine lots 3/11/12 . chapter 5
Something I didn't notice before, and which I think is cool, is that many of the quotes seem to be from the last two generations of Gondor's captains - Ecthelion, Throngil etc. I think it shows the close knit upper classes of Gondorian society and also shows the state of the printing press in Gondor at this time. How cool!
And then Eomer coins a particular phrase and says it's by Eomer Eomundsson. Lol!
| shine lots 3/11/12 . chapter 4
I like how you make Eomer and Lothiriel cease hostilities through compulsion to behave politely. I just really, really like that idea. So much. 3 it!
And then, once they've started talking, they begin to interest each other. And the relationship grows form there. Aww. how great!
| shine lots 3/11/12 . chapter 3
I love how you have a great vocabulary and use elaborate words. You choose appropriate words which make your points clear and interesting to read. 3 it!
| shine lots 3/11/12 . chapter 1
This is amazing and hilarious. I like how you characterise Imrahil through his dialogue. He seems astute, and his intentions at all points are consistent with his words. You do this for all main characters really - Lothiriel, Amrothos, Eomer. I like it!