What a fantastic story! You created such a nice dynamic between Eomer and Lothiriel and the situation you put them in on the island was incredibly amusing to read. I particularly appreciate that you didn't go the cliche route but opted to have them wait until they met again in Minas Tirith to decide where things would go. I think I would have lost respect for Lothiriel if she had completely changed her mind after their little adventure together and suddenly decided that she wanted to get married to Eomer after all. Instead, it was a very realistic and satisfying conclusion for the two of them, and I loved that their relationship ended up being founded on more than just humor and longing but also the way they were able to work together to aid Rohan. (But I must admit that that parting kiss in Chapter 9 was pretty electric!)

I am looking forward to reading your other stories! I think you are fantastic writer and storyteller, and I can't wait to see your other takes on the Eomer/Lothiriel love story. Keep up the great work!

Lothíriel really is brilliant. :) I confess that I would have done the same thing as she were I in her position and think about the reprocutions of annoying Eomer later. And the ending is most satisfactory. :D

~~Ranger

EXCELLENT. Super sweet and your characterizations were great!

OMG, wow. Lothiriel sure has some kinda personality. *lol* I like it. *reads on*

This was adorable, fantastically written... and I absolutely loved Lothlorien's enchanting, bright, high-minded spirit! You make it very easy to understand why Eomer couldn't resist her. Terrific job wit hall of this.

Now I definitely know you take your cues from Jane Austen! Lovely story, and now I only want another...

“What if I choose to take it personally?”

Oh, that sent a shiver down my spine. So much passion... Only one chapter to go, sniffle...

The conversation with the brother is a clever method of bringing out her change of mind.

"That man was urgently in need of a firm set-down."

Yay, and he's so not going to get it from her...
Why am I constantly reminded of Darcy and Elizabeth?

It's all lovely, especially the reference to hobbits.

This seems to be a recurring motif in all your stories and rightly so: Feeling safe with a man and being able to laugh with him must be two of the most potent aphrodisiacs of all.

Denethor and the pink dress - the mind boggles indeed!

Nice cliffhanger, lucky me I'm reading this after the event, so to speak, hehehe. I'm off to the next chapter.

I just adore the way you twist your plots.

Hehehe. This is admirable. The aunt could be taken straight from a Jane Austen novel (Lady Catherine?). Oh, and the "discreet arrangements" - I read a lot of interesting stuff about these arrangements in Edwardian times, we should chat about that some time.

Excellent! I like how you are using military terms here to describe the situation, it is appropriate for Lothiriel's state of mind and at the same rather amusing.