Hey Lia!

Jippieh! Next story! Week's rescued! For you - end of free time, isn't it *g*.

At first I thought it would be quite hard to forget last story's happy end, but it wasn't. First scene's pink dress made it all easy... What a great scene! I LOVED it!This is Lothiriel at her best. Just how I love her.

And again that aunt - seems that for one time in her life she made a good thing... But remember: Don't ask her about sex. *g*

Poor girl, I can understand that Lothiriel is angry about being married without having anything to say about it, but there worse men than Eomer, aren't they? Even if he's cold for now and doesn't seem so lovely.

But perhaps I should better say poor Eomer. Even if he's a warrior, I'm not sure he knows what waits for him in this angry gondorian princess...

I enjoyed this first chapter so much and I'm looking forward to the next one.

I was sure your next story will again be an incredible thing after the end of "Of Falcons and Mumakil" and you didn't disappoint me. It's great! I loved it from the first sentence on.

I hope you go an fast, for as I can't wait long to read on.

Viele liebe Grüße,

Nemea

PS: Dead sea creature? I read it, but did I review? Damn, don't tell me I forgot. I can remember some around that time.. Oh Dear, if I forgot I SO sorry. I'm going to do that right now. Promised!

This is a great beginning to this story, and I can't wait for the proceeding chapters. I liked Lothiriel's tactical stragegies to avoid this marriage, including the invitation of all the single and pretty women.

I love how Lothiriel's thoughts turn the story into a tactical strategy. I don't think anyone's ever done that before. She seems to plan her attacks carefully. That dress sounded very similar to a garish prom dress I saw in a magazine once. It was hot pink silk with a light pastel green chiffon overlay. It was absolutely hideous. And it painted a delicious picture of Lothiriel in my mind.

I'm excited to see where you go with this.

Sere mi Eru...LSoA

You didn't actually say it was in this chapter did you? Is is a ploy to keep us reading? Seriously,Lia - you won't have any trouble -I loved it. I bet she soon changes her mind and he's not really a block of ice. Keep posting very very regularly. LBJ

Hmm I too have to give up on the sea creature - unless you're talking about the reference to the swan - but that really isn't a sea creature is it? Anyways, great chapter I look forward to the rest of the story!

I give up on the dead sea creature unless it is the dye in the pink dress. My mother would agree with you on the color choices-she would never let me wear pink-said it didn't work with olive complexions! As usual, this beginning lives up to your usual standards of well-thought out writing and characterizations, but I am having a difficult moment here wondering what kind of person would want to escape Eomer! Looking forward to seeing how you defend that position!