Hehehe. This is admirable. The aunt could be taken straight from a Jane Austen novel (Lady Catherine?). Oh, and the "discreet arrangements" - I read a lot of interesting stuff about these arrangements in Edwardian times, we should chat about that some time.

Excellent! I like how you are using military terms here to describe the situation, it is appropriate for Lothiriel's state of mind and at the same rather amusing.

Bravo. Great work as usual. My god... I'm probably just going to sit here and read you entire archive...

This was so much fun to read! I love how you portrayed Lothiriel, this is probably one of my favorite scenarios for her!

“Boromir was the logical choice.” Her heart grew heavy when she remembered her poor doomed cousin, the idol of her childhood.

Well, I know in days past close relations did marry, but would they really have first cousins marry in Gondor?

u seem to have a strange thing for making lothiriel puke...this is the 3rd story it has happened in that i've read by u...it's fucking sick.

You're a Genius! How do you come up with these?

I LOVE the idea of them marooned on that beach together LOL

Another amazing work of art Lia :)

Congrats *bows down*

Emma xoxo

my oh my now that was a fun twist on the story! Thoroughly enjoyed that! most entertaining! Though not as complex as 'On Wings of a Storm', it was extremely well written and very amusing, and I quite enjoyed the plotline :P

Take care

Anea

I'm bookmarking this excellent story so I can easily find it when I want to smile.I loved it at HASA which was my first introduction to your work.

i detect a hint of pride and prejudice in this chapter

please correct me if I'm mistaken, but it strongly reminds me of Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth's first dance together, but if I'm not correct plese dismiss that last part.

i loved this one too! lol i just finished another and reviewed it earlyer this morning. i would try to write one of these but like stated in my previous review that would be hopeless.

sigh

what can be done?

Dana

Seems like you're taking a leaf out of Pride and Prejudice, especially with the dance scene. All in all, however, this was excellent. My only objection occurs in the last chapter, where you describe 'sweet-tasting red lips.' Other then that, it read like a professional romance novel. Ever thought of it?

Great job. I really enjoyed it.

This was really good. very funny in parts and well thought out over all! I loved the quotes at the top of each chapter. They really added to the story as a whole!

Nela

I can't remember if I reviewed before or not, because my computer has this evil little habit of crashing whenever I try to review things...anyway. You have persuaded me that Eomer is interesting and worth a second look...he's a bit sexy isn't he? Without being as placid as Aragorn, sensitive as Faramir...anyway, I've been won over! I also like Lothiriel - girl power!

I really enjoyed this Eomer-Lothiriel scenario, the plot was engaging, as was the dialogue.

Thank you very much for sharing this! )