FINISH THE STORY! I can't be left hanging like this!

WHAT HAPPENS!? I must know!

Don't ever stop writing! JAKE SNAKE FTW!1

I listened to LordQuadros read this on YouTube (Well, the first one) and I must say that it was much funnier on YouTube. I originally thought that you, as well as Peter Chimaera, were writing fanfics horribly because you were trying to be funny, but, now that I know that you have language problems, I think that before you post another fanfic, you should get language counseling, or at least a proofreader. Also... Jake Snake?!?

After reading this and the previous installment, I have but one question, did you at least study the source material before writing this?

! What happens next?! I want to know! I love your writing, even though its... sparatic and not really fluent. Something about it reminds me of little kids. hee hee.

That was the finest piece of Fan Literature that i have ever read in my whole life, and I have read a lot of Fan Literature. I love your stories.

This, dear sir, rivals Full Life Consequences.
Too amazing for words. Keep writing there.

I really loved the part where Jake brutally kills the 10 bad guys. It really shows the uncontrollable stress and emotions he had at the time. And the part when he stabs the boss in the hart is an unexpected twist. I mean, who knew that he had some imaginary organ called a hart?

Dude, that was freaking awesome. Seriously, no joke, it was truly a masterpiece. Easily one of the best fanfics I've ever read on here. You have to continue it, man! I can't wait to see if Ocelot kills Jake Snake or not.

This seems more at home as a 4chan meme than as a legitimate story. One of the worst things I've ever read.

Greatest MGS fic ever. I love you

This is absolutely awesome. As Hermisia said, quite possibly the best metal gear fic of all time. WRITE MORE.

You represent everything that is wrong with fanfiction.

This... thing... is what happens when someone drugs the english language, rapes it, and then forces it to have an abortion. You then take the BLOODY DEAD CHILD and post it up on the internet for all to see.

I pray to God you are doing this in jest. Because if you are serious then Humanity has lost all hope and we should just nuke ourselves from orbit now.

Quite possibly the greatest MGS fic of all time.